Succubus Tamer no Isekai Musou - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

[MangaDex]

 

[Tasha_Godspell]

wut? Where is he running to?

 

[Lectonal]

I hope my attempt at redrawing was satisfactory!

Although, it did take longer than expected haha

 

[Timewaster_zoltar]

I hope my attempt at redrawing was satisfactory!

Although, it did take longer than expected haha

hey you did great! hell it wasn't even noticeable at all, thank you for the translation!

 

[lesseffective]

My only recommendation would be separate out the volume extras from the chapter into a Chapter 5.5. It's not any sort of hard & fast rule or anything, just rather a common convention.

wut? Where is he running to?

 

[MerlinD]

Where is he going lolz
bet he's going to run into a monster

 

[Lectonal]

My only recommendation would be separate out the volume extras from the chapter into a Chapter 5.5. It's not any sort of hard & fast rule or anything, just rather a common convention.

Thank you for the insight!

I'll make sure to keep that in mind for the future.

I likely won't change it for this chapter (due to it already being uploaded) - unless I'm urged to do so by a member of staff, or someone of equal authority.

Many thanks,
Lectonal

 

[DiscountJoJo]

Hey I think ur doing a good job considering you're keeping the english TL's coming, so no worries! Until some bigwig TL group comes round to swipe this id say your uploads are more than good enough!

 

[jhs_reika]

It's baffling how different they were.
In appearance, moral, and competency.
Thank god for the mom's DNA.

 

[spawnknight]

Oh...these are volume scans?

...So where's the nipples?

 

[baconcat]

incomp-
etent

Oh, the irony.

 

[Amariithynar]

My only recommendation would be separate out the volume extras from the chapter into a Chapter 5.5. It's not any sort of hard & fast rule or anything, just rather a common convention.

Seconding. It gives them the proper space they deserve and searchability, without bloating another chapter invisibly.

Thank you for the insight!

I'll make sure to keep that in mind for the future.

I likely won't change it for this chapter (due to it already being uploaded) - unless I'm urged to do so by a member of staff, or someone of equal authority.

Many thanks,
Lectonal

Don't need to remove it from this one, but I'd still toss them up as an extra chapter separately.

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[Morose]

I am kind-off tired of this "villian = ugly features or expression" cliche.

 

[Lectonal]

Oh, the irony.

I see what you mean now, in reference to the dots...

I believe they are meant to break the word up phonetically. I understand that might make sense, but on paper, I feel it would only mangle the word further.

Regards,
Lectonal

Edit: I'm willing to try it though, if you feel that's best.

 

[DreadKaiser]

start by throwing that liability into a guillotine

 

[ElectroSlam]

Wait, didn’t the town dislike the mc because of the false rumor spread by his family? And if that was the case shouldn’t that guard not be as happy that he’s there in the first place?

 

[SingularPrime]

I am kind-off tired of this "villian = ugly features or expression" cliche.

Makes them easier to dislike/ hate, pretty sure that is the main reason they do it lol

 

[Morose]

Makes them easier to dislike/ hate, pretty sure that is the main reason they do it lol

But it's also boost a negative perception as well.

And it's not like we haven't had good looking negative characters, like most of Bleach & Naruto antagonists for example.

 

[baconcat]

I believe

I feel

Yeah, well, try "believing" it "feels" better to drive 75 in a 50 zone on your next speeding ticket, see how far that gets you. Rules weren't pulled out of someone's ass to have something to beat people over the head, rules were established because they crystallized as beneficial and reliable reference. If you're sitting on the bog and record your works on the paper you're wiping with, by all means come up with your private orthography and language as much as you want. But if you mean for your stuff to get read by the public where everyone ought to have received some form of education, you'd better match the rules that were most likely used in said education. Otherwise you're just posting it more to feel good about yourself rather than to actually contribute to a forum; and if such write-only, bleat-into-the-void notion is more your thing, perhaps Twitter would be better suited.

Read and learn. And yes, you should have learnt that in school, and with that I don't mean a vocational school specifically for typesetting manga.