Suterare Ouji ga Saizensen de Tekikoku no Heishi wo Chiryou Shitara Jitsu wa Dainana Oujo Datta Ken - Ch. 2.1

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Thanks, but there are lots of instances we’re the last word is missing (missing word in brackets by me):
  • page 5: “I didn’t say anything! Shut [up!]l
  • page 7: “Where the hell are they taking [us?]”
  • page 8: “swear upon the name Rosemary, bestowed upon me by my great [???]”
  • page 12: “The first man to ever touch my [breasts.]”
  • page 13: The last bubble has the same text as the one before (but with the last word missing).
  • page 15: “First take a look at [me/this/???]”
 
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damn, MC is very short here, even though he height is still considered normal at 160 cm :dogkek:

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thank you for translating
 
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There are several times where the last word of the speech has been cut off:
1.) "That crime deserves death ten thousand" -> "That crime deserves death ten thousand times."
2.) "I mean - I'll never forgive" -> "I mean - I'll never forgive you."
3.) "I didn't say anything! Shut" -> "I didn't say anything! Shut up!"
4.) "Where the hell are they taking" -> "Where the hell are you taking us?"
5.) "I, the seventh princess of the Dragoon Empire, sear upon the name Rosemary, bestowed upon me by my great" -> "I, the seventh princess of the Dragoon Empire, sear upon the name Rosemary, bestowed upon me by my great mother/father/emperor/empress" (whoever named her is missing)
6.) "The first man to ever touch my" -> "The first man to ever touch my ... / chest." (Depending on if she actually says it or stops just short of it)
7.) "First, take a look at" -> "First take a look at .../this" (Once again depending on where she stops talking)
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Addionally on page 13 there is a duplication of text in the 2 last speech bubbles there say "Don't worry. They are waiting in another room." and "Don't worry. They are awiting in another". Obviously the last bubble should have a different text.
 
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Thanks, but there are lots of instances we’re the last word is missing (missing word in brackets by me):
  • page 5: “I didn’t say anything! Shut [up!]l
  • page 7: “Where the hell are they taking [us?]”
  • page 8: “swear upon the name Rosemary, bestowed upon me by my great [???]”
  • page 12: “The first man to ever touch my [breasts.]”
  • page 13: The last bubble has the same text as the one before (but with the last word missing).
  • page 15: “First take a look at [me/this/???]”
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The doubling at the end of page 13 has not been fixed.
Probably the content of that bubble should have been something along the lines of "You may remove the blindfold now."

And on page 10, middle panel, there is an inverted ! in front of the "Understood!", which is not a thing in English. Same on page 15 in the thought bubble about the emperor.
 
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The doubling at the end of page 13 has not been fixed.
Probably the content of that bubble should have been something along the lines of "You may remove the blindfold now."

And on page 10, middle panel, there is an inverted ! in front of the "Understood!", which is not a thing in English. Same on page 15 in the thought bubble about the emperor.
also in page 13, 2nd and 3rd texts are swapped
 

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