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For all of her attempts at being morally self-righteous, it seems to be overlooked that Ars is literally a five year old fucking child, and only Ars knows that he's actually significantly older.
I don't care about the slavery cliche, or how he will obviously buy her and she will obviously start to warm up to him because of that. I don't mind cliches, most of them exist because they are good structures to build or progress a story. What I care about is that she gave this absurd and selfish speech about why a five year old trying to help her is actually the scum of the earth, and not only did she get away with her bullshit, but the author used the main character to confirm that she was morally in the right, even though she obviously was not. For someone demanding that he consider other's circumstances, she was remarkably unwilling to consider the circumstances surrounding a five year old rich child who just wants to help in the best way he can.
I've read too many stories, not even manga, but fantasy and science fiction novels, with that kind of bullshit, where the main character is treated like scum by randos and orbital characters and then the author shoves their ass into the picture by given them a soap box and having the MC agree with them. It's also almost always a female character that does it. I wasted a week of my life reading The Belgariad because it came recommended, and I've also read the entire Wheel of Time series, so I have zero patience for that bullshit anymore, I'm sick to death of it. Keep your moralizing bitch female characters who are Always Right to yourself. It's one of the most obnoxious traits of a Mary Sue, and one that they all share, and while you don't have to be a Mary Sue to do it, you do have to be an author's pet character, and it's ALWAYS a red flag.
The worst part of all is that this isn't even how it happened in the LN, apparently. According to other people posting, when Ars met her in the original, she was already captured and up for sale. So that means this entire insulting sub plot of bullying a 5 year old for wanting to help the homeless and forcing us to listen to a two-chapter long self-righteous speech where the author uses her as a mouthpiece for their own opinions was an unnecessary extra addition. This did not have to exist.
I don't care about the slavery cliche, or how he will obviously buy her and she will obviously start to warm up to him because of that. I don't mind cliches, most of them exist because they are good structures to build or progress a story. What I care about is that she gave this absurd and selfish speech about why a five year old trying to help her is actually the scum of the earth, and not only did she get away with her bullshit, but the author used the main character to confirm that she was morally in the right, even though she obviously was not. For someone demanding that he consider other's circumstances, she was remarkably unwilling to consider the circumstances surrounding a five year old rich child who just wants to help in the best way he can.
I've read too many stories, not even manga, but fantasy and science fiction novels, with that kind of bullshit, where the main character is treated like scum by randos and orbital characters and then the author shoves their ass into the picture by given them a soap box and having the MC agree with them. It's also almost always a female character that does it. I wasted a week of my life reading The Belgariad because it came recommended, and I've also read the entire Wheel of Time series, so I have zero patience for that bullshit anymore, I'm sick to death of it. Keep your moralizing bitch female characters who are Always Right to yourself. It's one of the most obnoxious traits of a Mary Sue, and one that they all share, and while you don't have to be a Mary Sue to do it, you do have to be an author's pet character, and it's ALWAYS a red flag.
The worst part of all is that this isn't even how it happened in the LN, apparently. According to other people posting, when Ars met her in the original, she was already captured and up for sale. So that means this entire insulting sub plot of bullying a 5 year old for wanting to help the homeless and forcing us to listen to a two-chapter long self-righteous speech where the author uses her as a mouthpiece for their own opinions was an unnecessary extra addition. This did not have to exist.