Tensei Shitara Hime Datta node Dansou Joshi Kiwamete Saikyou Mahou Tsukai Mezasuwa - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.2

[MangaDex]

 

[T10_]

I expected more of the magic system than plot armor "just think of it" bs

 

[Noy_Telinu]

Ugh this story is already annoying me.

Why do the most stupid, clichéd stories become the multi volume ones while the interesting ones get axed or stay one shots?

I say as I continue to read this

 

[Nyaaa]

I expected more of the magic system than plot armor "just think of it" bs

I know right TvT

 

[Rukja]

hmm it feels like this chapter ismore of the dismantling type ..
why is mc wearing a belt strap over his breast? why does she uses her puppy eye princess charm when she should know from her previous life how it works
and why did she grab a jacket from her father? i mean isnt he the only male in her famioly? shouldnt it have been easier for her to pick a random servants clothes?

 

[Apocrypse]

Thanks a ton for the translation! I noticed some possible areas that could be improved grammatically for a few pages. I love this series enough that I’d like to volunteer to work with you as PR. I can also lightly redraw. I would do this for free but only for this series. Thanks for considering it! If so, please send me your Discord tag, then I hope to help!

Page 6:
Level 1, little change: "My sister who was hired as a maid there became despised by prince Ethan who brutally assaulted her until she died."

Level 2, complete change: "My sister was hired as a maid there, and prince Ethan ended up brutally killing her out of contempt."

Page 13:
"Why the fuck did I think of something like that for a guy?"

Page 15:
"Were you targeting me from the start?"

Page 19:
"Why the hell would I do that?"

"I know that people from the royal family are good at using people as bait."

For pages 15 and 19, I used bold to point out the words I changed. It's not for emphasis. Thanks again for your hard work!

 

[fireproofemu]

Translation is borderline unreadable. You desperately need a proofreader who's a native English speaker.

 

[monkey123]

5th grade syndrome

 

[Saon]

Thank you for translations! Hope this stays a light and silly chuunibyou story!

 

[RePlay_]

Thanks a ton for the translation! I noticed some possible areas that could be improved grammatically for a few pages. I love this series enough that I’d like to volunteer to work with you as PR. I can also lightly redraw. I would do this for free but only for this series. Thanks for considering it! If so, please send me your Discord tag, then I hope to help!

Page 6:
Level 1, little change: "My sister who was hired as a maid there became despised by prince Ethan who brutally assaulted her until she died."

Level 2, complete change: "My sister was hired as a maid there, and prince Ethan ended up brutally killing her out of contempt."

Page 13:
"Why the fuck did I think of something like that for a guy?"

Page 15:
"Were you targeting me from the start?"

Page 19:
"Why the hell would I do that?"

"I know that people from the royal family are good at using people as bait."

For pages 15 and 19, I used bold to point out the words I changed. It's not for emphasis. Thanks again for your hard work!

this really helps, like... fr, this will improve my grammar skill more further (i hope, cuz im dumb), thanks for mentioning them




and nah, i wouldn't think of that as emphasis, why would i? only dumb people will get depressed over some criticism that will make them improve.

oh, and my dc tag is biribir1 (BiriBiri#8857 for the legacy username ver), tag me there if u have any free time i'm getting tired of doing solo frfr ineedfren

 

[RePlay_]

Translation is borderline unreadable. You desperately need a proofreader who's a native English speaker.

ikr, i suck at english

 

[Apocrypse]

this really helps, like... fr, this will improve my grammar skill more further (i hope, cuz im dumb), thanks for mentioning them




and nah, i wouldn't think of that as emphasis, why would i? only dumb people will get depressed over some criticism that will make them improve.

oh, and my dc tag is biribir1 (BiriBiri#8857 for the legacy username ver), tag me there if u have any free time i'm getting tired of doing solo frfr ineedfren

Added! I'm Es! I hope I succeed in helping take some of that weight off of you!
Thanks for keeping an open mind, too! (And sorry for saying it again, but thanks for translating!)

 

[HiraOmnibus]

Of all the overly element reliant magic systems out there this is probably the worst. Seriously, each element does 1 thing? That just makes women not being allowed to use magic even dumber! Fire magic would be one thing for being dangerous, and I could see them making up some misogynistic bs about "women aren't smart enough for healing", but if water mages are so vital for every town why would you not want as many as possible?

 

[Paragon]

Tbh the manga seems cute enough so I am going to read it.
The story is cliched af but really fun so I hope it stays that way.