The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way - Ch. 1 - Day 0

[MangaDex]

 

[Litreara]

 

[KiteBlue]

Not all heroes wear capes

 

[Phantaminium]

Truly a king amongst men, hopefully there’s some context for the reason the author thinks she wrote an orgy and not REDACTED.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Truly a king amongst men, hopefully there’s some context for the reason the author thinks she wrote an orgy and not REDACTED.

The reason is that this is what consent looks like. The author is trying to play every angle simultaneously for this story, and its characters. FMC is both a shy, weak-willed victim, but also perfectly fits the stereotype of an enthusiastic gyaru slut. The story is a wholesome tale of "I can fix her" between herself, and her adoptive family, but also a pornographic chronicling of the girl's unrestrained sex drive leading her to engage in regular gangbangs, and fantasize about her brother.

This leads us to weird situations where she's clearly somewhere of her own free will, doing things of her own free will, but the author still wants us to walk away feeling bad for her because she looked slightly uncomfortable for a couple of pages that she smacked in the middle of "FUCK YOU, LITTLE BRO. YOU'RE NOT MY DAD!" and "HARDER! HARDER! I LOVE COCK SO MUUUUCH"

Chapter 4 even has the narrator itself trying to dictate to us how to feel about her too!

 

[romie68]

Truly a king amongst men, hopefully there’s some context for the reason the author thinks she wrote an orgy and not REDACTED.

It’s an NTR manga

 

[BraveDude8]

@BuyVelomobiles Why are these chapters set as Volume 0?

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

@BuyVelomobiles Why are these chapters set as Volume 0?

Ⅰ had put Volume 1 absentmindedly, then to fix the issue, I had put Volume 0. If you're asking, then apparently that didn't fix it.

 

[BraveDude8]

Ⅰ had put Volume 1 absentmindedly, then to fix the issue, I had put Volume 0. If you're asking, then apparently that didn't fix it.

Correct syntax for these is to leave the volume field blank.

 

[Phantaminium]

The reason is that this is what consent looks like. The author is trying to play every angle simultaneously for this story, and its characters. FMC is both a shy, weak-willed victim, but also perfectly fits the stereotype of an enthusiastic gyaru slut. The story is a wholesome tale of "I can fix her" between herself, and her adoptive family, but also a pornographic chronicling of the girl's unrestrained sex drive leading her to engage in regular gangbangs, and fantasize about her brother.

This leads us to weird situations where she's clearly somewhere of her own free will, doing things of her own free will, but the author still wants us to walk away feeling bad for her because she looked slightly uncomfortable for a couple of pages that she smacked in the middle of "FUCK YOU, LITTLE BRO. YOU'RE NOT MY DAD!" and "HARDER! HARDER! I LOVE COCK SO MUUUUCH"

Chapter 4 even has the narrator itself trying to dictate to us how to feel about her too!

Yeah like consenting or not the whole situation feels awful to read. When I was at uni in halls where guys and girls would regularly get drunk together and nothing can turn me off more than a smashed off her face woman, slurring words trying to be in any way sexually appealing. This might speak more to women from the UK than anything else kek. The situation in chapter 1 just doesn't vibe with how I'd want to get with someone, which normally has nothing to do with horny 4 page manga where you're rooting for the siblings to bang but there's just something here that has stuck in my head since I read it.

I don't even think she understands what she made which is probably what drives me even more insane. The schitzo flip from being a super whore to uwu oniichan. She's getting overwhelmed and infatuated off the simplest acts of kindness a sibling can do for another and her brother until this point must've not done them for them to mean anything to her now. So if he's as nice as he seems to be then why would he have not given her the baseline interaction you'd give to a sibling in the months or years before this point they knew each other.

Also if all it took was simple acts of kindness to keep her whore gene in check, are you telling me a fucking timid, fully stacked bombshell never received a random act of kindness, or act of kindness from a dude romantically interested who wasn't thinking about running through her with his boys. The consent thing irks me more personally but I've overlooked worse. This author genuinely has a talent.

It’s an NTR manga

Yeah and I should be fine or just be like eww and leave if I'm not but this series has bothered me and I can't work out why.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

When I was at uni in halls where guys and girls would regularly get drunk together and nothing can turn me off more than a smashed off her face woman, slurring words trying to be in any way sexually appealing. This might speak more to women from the UK than anything else kek. The situation in chapter 1 just doesn't vibe with how I'd want to get with someone,

She's not really that bad off, but I totally get what you mean.

I don't even think she understands what she made which is probably what drives me even more insane. The schitzo flip from being a super whore to uwu oniichan. She's getting overwhelmed and infatuated off the simplest acts of kindness a sibling can do for another and her brother until this point must've not done them for them to mean anything to her now. So if he's as nice as he seems to be then why would he have not given her the baseline interaction you'd give to a sibling in the months or years before this point they knew each other.

Also if all it took was simple acts of kindness to keep her whore gene in check, are you telling me a fucking timid, fully stacked bombshell never received a random act of kindness, or act of kindness from a dude romantically interested who wasn't thinking about running through her with his boys. The consent thing irks me more personally but I've overlooked worse. This author genuinely has a talent.

HA! Now you're really thinking about it. This story is a fallback she put together on the spot after her original got her banned. She changed JUST the incest netori aspect to something wholesome, and didn't think through the implications for the rest of the story.

You're exactly right on all of it. But again: The author's trying to play every angle at once. She has a loving family, that also somehow left her feeling so isolated she found enthusiastic comfort in gangbangs, but was also "saved" in less than a week by the brother doing the absolute bare minimum for her after years of what was apparently simultaneous love and neglect.

At the start, she's assertive, and aggressive, but then in the next page she's a wallflower, then in the next, she's a mega whore, then in the next, a blushing virgin for her brother, then she feels crushing isolation from the family that clearly loves her, then she acknowledges that they've actually always concerned themselves with her, then the next, she's blushing for brother again, then the next, she's going to the dude's house, and then blowing him, then finally, she decides she's not a wallflower anymore, and tells the dude she's actually not going to suck his dick anymore because she got a single text about dinner...

Basically once every couple of pages, on average, the story just dumps some new tone for her, and demands we play along, past events be damned.

Yeah and I should be fine or just be like eww and leave if I'm not but this series has bothered me and I can't work out why.

It's that special kind of bad that makes you think. The story's not boring, the art's not ugly, it's just that none of it makes sense. Face it: If this story committed to literally any angle over the others, we'd be rooting for the author unironically.

 

[Phantaminium]

It's that special kind of bad that makes you think. The story's not boring, the art's not ugly, it's just that none of it makes sense. Face it: If this story committed to literally any angle over the others, we'd be rooting for the author unironically.

LOL I can't lie she could throw any trash together with this art and I'd be a fan, I think you summed up what I found so frustrating. Like if her brother was abusive and manipulative to her during childhood and then decided to stop since she's become a whore or something I'd find that more readable.

It's shocking how well she made a complete mess of every motivation possible. I'd actually like to read something where she doesn't change the premise since she seems to be able to do the clusterfuck of emotions an NTR or NTR adjacent story invoke really well.

 

[Kese04]

Thanks. Your line of translated chapters on this has been the best so far imo.