The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way (Fanbox 18+ Content) - Ch. 6 - A Story About the Gyaru Trading Sex for Cred…

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Egaki sensei sure knows what she wants to draw regardless if people will read this or not. At least there’s a decent percentage of people that are aware enough to call her out during the pre-serialization. Thanks for the translations.
 
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Egaki sensei sure knows what she wants to draw regardless if people will read this or not. At least there’s a decent percentage of people that are aware enough to call her out during the pre-serialization. Thanks for the translations.
She knows what she wants to draw, but is too much of a coward to own it and come clean about her fetishes

If she really wanted to secure that bag, and is so ashamed of her kinks to the point of making all that circus with multiple timeless, she should have gone into serialization with a different pen name and characters
 
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Just a bit of context: The author posted this chapter on her FANBOX on September 30th, while chapter 9 of the serialization was released on September 13th. It seems like this FANBOX chapter was delayed, which is likely why there's a spoiler warning about chapter 9 of the serialization.

Additionally, it appears the author has been short on time for creating FANBOX content. On October 13th, she re-released the last two chapters without the text boxes:

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7月&9月ギャル更新 文字無し差分

Textless variations.
July & September Gal update, textless variations.
 
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With the serialized version, it made it easier to differentiate fanbox with the series.
And now, my problem with this fanbox is its too short. Only 6 pages?
 
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I personally hate the format of splitting works into a clean and H version, and enjoy seeing the drama around someone fumbling it so spectacularly.

The flc is so badly wasted even in the retry serialization version. Could have been something really great either as a traditionally formatted clean or H work from the start.
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Egaki sensei sure knows what she wants to draw regardless if people will read this or not. At least there’s a decent percentage of people that are aware enough to call her out during the pre-serialization. Thanks for the translations.
tbh, people calling her out only because she's not being clear whether all the ero ver. was canon or not before, though, it's before this series being serialized

but yeah, people definitely blowing it out of proportion, like, too much, instead of just asking nicely
 
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tbh, people calling her out only because she's not being clear whether all the ero ver. was canon or not before, though, it's before this series being serialized

but yeah, people definitely blowing it out of proportion, like, too much, instead of just asking nicely
When the orgy chapter was first released, fans asked the author politely if it was canon. In response, the author denied it was canon. She deleted all related posts from her X account, making it difficult to show records her statements directly. Some traces might still be available on forums. At that time, even though chapter 2 of the pre-serialization had a noticeable 'FANBOX hole', fans generally accepted her denial because the connection to the orgy chapter wasn’t that obvious.

The 'FANBOX hole' in Chapter 2 of the pre-serialization:

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It's important to remember that she didn’t respond well to these questions and even vented her frustration on X. Obviously, she deleted everything.

The situation became more complicated when Chapter 4 of the pre-serialization, accompanied by a new FANBOX chapter. In this chapter, the dialogue on the first page practically confirmed that the FANBOX content is canon (the orgy chapter). Then on page 2, there’s a panel that directly follows the 'FANBOX hole,' clearly indicating that the FANBOX content was indeed part of the story. Fans noticed this continuity and asked her again if the FANBOX content was canon. She denied it once more, but this time, when fans provided clear evidence of the connection, she ignored their questions entirely. Fortunately, there is a record of this interaction:

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Recently, the author finally clarified everything after further confusion arose when a new chapter was published on her FANBOX shortly after serialization began. Given how the author contradicted herself and mishandled the situation multiple times, I don’t think people are overreacting. She clearly made significant errors in her communication with fans.

Another critical issue to consider is that by integrating the FANBOX into the story, the author effectively restricted access to crucial narrative elements for those who didn’t pay for it. For anyone unaware of the FANBOX, the storyline appears to be a typical 'save her' scenario. However, once you view the FANBOX content, it radically undermines everything the public initially saw. The character transitions from being portrayed as a victim to someone who embraces a more enthusiastic, sexualized role. This abrupt shift completely undermines the consistency of character development and highlights a blatant disregard for narrative accessibility in storytelling.
 
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Recently, the author finally clarified everything after further confusion arose when a new chapter was published on her FANBOX shortly after serialization began. Given how the author contradicted herself and mishandled the situation multiple times, I don’t think people are overreacting. She clearly made significant errors in her communication with fans.
look, my bad that i didn't make clear that the author also acting the way she is which makes things hard, because i was there, i'm also one of the people that complained that author acting the way she is, but you can't go and say "i don't think people are overreacting" because they do

while the author do bitch about even how normal fans that are acting nicely asking her, one of the few things she mentioned is that people are legit sending nasty messages towards her, and i even saw it myself on her twitter comment of her posts, a lot of those aren't nice things to say at all

my point is that, those kind of people, if they really don't like the author, they could just ditch the series with how the author act and how the story are written, i did, i only came back recently to see the serialized ver. of the series and i just happen to see that this r-18 got updated as well considering what happened and i'm curious what people say in the comment (no, i don't follow this series, i legit just saw it on latest update)

but honestly, you don't need to make paragraph of what the issue is, i really am at the heart of it when people are raging, so i knew all the issue
 

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