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The Former Legendary Hero Will Enjoy His Second Life Without Restraint
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While I can understand authors who look at the dozens of meek isekai MCs out there and think “man, because of their OP skills all they’re doing is humblebragging - I could do better than that”, how come all of them just jump to the opposite end of the spectrum and make their isekai protagonists power-hungry douchebags who are only interested in the four Fs?
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Getting serious Aiki vibes from this, it's like Joukyuu got isekai'd.
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It would be better if you left the translation of Japanese to English to someone else. Your redrawing and typesetting is great, but the translation quality is absolute shite - it is extremely hard to understand over half of the dialogues as they make no sense.
It would be better if you left the translation of Japanese to English to someone else. Your redrawing and typesetting is great, but the translation quality is absolute shite - it is extremely hard to understand over half of the dialogues as they make no sense.
starting from ch15, the translation is mtl, and didn't bother to check the flow of conversation.
actually the conversations of this manga aren't that hard to translate.
here's my rough translation to ch15
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
actually the conversations of this manga aren't that hard to translate.
here's my rough translation to ch15
Chapter 15
PAGE 1
side note: After healing her heart, where did Orion go…!?
Panel4:
…
Orion?
・・・・・・
PAGE 2
Panel3:
...
Don't tell me, those guys!!
PAGE 3
Panel3:
Boss!!
Are you alright!?
Damn!!
The door won't open!?
Do something about this!!
Panel4:
Magic is the key──!!
Panel5:
Y-you guys… Do
Do you think doing this to me won't leave you any consequences!?
PAGE 4
Panel1:
I… I-I-I
W-w-what will you do to me!?
・・・
Panel2:
Y-y-you'll kill me!?
・・・・・・
Panel3:
Ohh…
That's a good idea
Eek…!!
Panel4:
W...W-why
What the hell did I do───
PAGE 5
Panel1
You commited a sin
Panel2:
...sin!?
Panel3:
First───
Panel4:
You laid a hand on my woman
Huh?
Panel5:
W...woman?
Second
PAGE 6
Panel1
You laid a hand on my woman
Huh!? what woman
…
Don't tell me!?
Panel2:
Joze!?*
(TL/N: I think it's short for Josephine)
Panel3:
No, "that" was before I
Third
Panel4:
You laid a hand on my woman
Panel5:
…
...eek!!
PAGE 7
Panel1-Panel2:
Eeeeek!!
Y...y-y-you guys
If you kill me here
Do you know what will happen to you guys!?
Panel3:
Same goes for you...
!?
Panel4:
You have no excuses, the fact that your selfishness caused a war
and together with these documents, I'll be submitting these to the Royal Court of Inquiry later
So now you know what will happen, right?
Panel5:
Of course...
Your court rank will inevitably be stripped, riiight?
Panel6:
Ah…
No
PAGE 8
Panel1
I'm sorry, that's just a sudden impulse!!
That's why, I swear!!
I will never again lay a hand on that woman
From now on, I will mend my way of life and do my best to serve for the sake of the people
Panel2:
I swear
I swear, so please I beg you───
Panel3:
turns head
Panel4:
…
...lie(doubt)*
*(TL/N: the kanji is "lie" but furigana says "dauto" or doubt)
Panel5
anel6:
Lie*, lie*, It's just a lie*
"I'll now be a good feudal lord", that's a lie
"Live for the sake of the people", that's a lie
EVERYTHING you said was just a lie(doubt)
*(TL/N: changed "doubt" to "lie")
PAGE 9
Panel1:
───and that's how it is
Too bad for you
Just give up…
kuku…
kkukuku!!
Panel2:
Kukukuku
Earlier you said that you'll will
...submit that information
Panel3:
!!
Panel4:
What if, right here and now
If I kill you guys for good!!
small text: Finally it's my turn
PAGE 10
Panel1
Hahahahahahahaha
Kill
Kill them!
Kill them!
Panel2:
Those guys───
Panel3:
Kill theeem───...n!!
PAGE 11
Panel1
...eh?
Panel2:
…!?
W──wha!?
What the hell!?
Panel3:
What the hell is this!?
The head of those guys suddenly──
What!?
Something's there!!
Watch out!!
Panel4:
Kill the enemy
Before they kill you
...kill them────
PAGE 12
Panel1
Finally it's my turn
Panel2:
I'm already tired of waiting
Panel3:
Suke here
Coming through without mercy
PAGE 13
PAGE 14
Panel1
Wha…suddenly coming out of nowhere
What are those guys!?
Women?
Those are women!!
Panel2:
Aren't your preparations great?
Yup!!
You did well!!
Alright
Panel3anel5:
Suke-san
Kaku-san
PAGE 15
Panel1
Go get them all!!
side note: Judgement time!!
side note: After healing her heart, where did Orion go…!?
Panel4:
…
Orion?
・・・・・・
PAGE 2
Panel3:
...
Don't tell me, those guys!!
PAGE 3
Panel3:
Boss!!
Are you alright!?
Damn!!
The door won't open!?
Do something about this!!
Panel4:
Magic is the key──!!
Panel5:
Y-you guys… Do
Do you think doing this to me won't leave you any consequences!?
PAGE 4
Panel1:
I… I-I-I
W-w-what will you do to me!?
・・・
Panel2:
Y-y-you'll kill me!?
・・・・・・
Panel3:
Ohh…
That's a good idea
Eek…!!
Panel4:
W...W-why
What the hell did I do───
PAGE 5
Panel1
You commited a sin
Panel2:
...sin!?
Panel3:
First───
Panel4:
You laid a hand on my woman
Huh?
Panel5:
W...woman?
Second
PAGE 6
Panel1
You laid a hand on my woman
Huh!? what woman
…
Don't tell me!?
Panel2:
Joze!?*
(TL/N: I think it's short for Josephine)
Panel3:
No, "that" was before I
Third
Panel4:
You laid a hand on my woman
Panel5:
…
...eek!!
PAGE 7
Panel1-Panel2:
Eeeeek!!
Y...y-y-you guys
If you kill me here
Do you know what will happen to you guys!?
Panel3:
Same goes for you...
!?
Panel4:
You have no excuses, the fact that your selfishness caused a war
and together with these documents, I'll be submitting these to the Royal Court of Inquiry later
So now you know what will happen, right?
Panel5:
Of course...
Your court rank will inevitably be stripped, riiight?
Panel6:
Ah…
No
PAGE 8
Panel1
I'm sorry, that's just a sudden impulse!!
That's why, I swear!!
I will never again lay a hand on that woman
From now on, I will mend my way of life and do my best to serve for the sake of the people
Panel2:
I swear
I swear, so please I beg you───
Panel3:
turns head
Panel4:
…
...lie(doubt)*
*(TL/N: the kanji is "lie" but furigana says "dauto" or doubt)
Panel5
anel6:Lie*, lie*, It's just a lie*
"I'll now be a good feudal lord", that's a lie
"Live for the sake of the people", that's a lie
EVERYTHING you said was just a lie(doubt)
*(TL/N: changed "doubt" to "lie")
PAGE 9
Panel1:
───and that's how it is
Too bad for you
Just give up…
kuku…
kkukuku!!
Panel2:
Kukukuku
Earlier you said that you'll will
...submit that information
Panel3:
!!
Panel4:
What if, right here and now
If I kill you guys for good!!
small text: Finally it's my turn
PAGE 10
Panel1
Hahahahahahahaha
Kill
Kill them!
Kill them!
Panel2:
Those guys───
Panel3:
Kill theeem───...n!!
PAGE 11
Panel1
...eh?
Panel2:
…!?
W──wha!?
What the hell!?
Panel3:
What the hell is this!?
The head of those guys suddenly──
What!?
Something's there!!
Watch out!!
Panel4:
Kill the enemy
Before they kill you
...kill them────
PAGE 12
Panel1
Finally it's my turn
Panel2:
I'm already tired of waiting
Panel3:
Suke here
Coming through without mercy
PAGE 13
PAGE 14
Panel1
Wha…suddenly coming out of nowhere
What are those guys!?
Women?
Those are women!!
Panel2:
Aren't your preparations great?
Yup!!
You did well!!
Alright
Panel3
anel5:Suke-san
Kaku-san
PAGE 15
Panel1
Go get them all!!
side note: Judgement time!!
Chapter 16
PAGE 1:
Panel2:
──gaah
Gyaaaaagahahaha──
Gubaeaaah!!
side note: The agonizing cries of the corrupted feudal lord
Panel3:
...eek!!
Panel4:
Why──
Panel5:
Why...
PAGE 2:
Panel1-Panel2:
Why is this happening──
PAGE 3:
Panel1:
My men
My assets
My mansion
Panel2:
All of them are gone
...why!?
Panel3:
Panel4:
...woman
PAGE 4:
Panel1:
By just laying a hand on a one woman
Panel2:
Because of that woman──
Panel3:
He...
He──lp
──me
!?
Panel4:
Eeeep!!
Panel5:
Panel6:
...!!
Eeeek
PAGE 5:
Panel1:
Panel2:
sfx: door closed
Panel3:
!!
Wwha!?
The door...
Open the door!!
Shiiit!!
Now... that all of them are settled
Panel4:
...!!
Aa...ah
Panel5:
You're the only one left
PAGE 6:
Panel1:
Sorry, I made you wait Darling ♡
PAGE 7:
Panel1:
...what's this
such big and fat thing
where did you...
Panel2:
I don't...
I don't want to die
Please... forgive me
I still... don't want to die
Panel3:
......
PAGE 8:
Panel1:
DIE
PAGE 9:
Panel1:
Panel2-Panel3:
...hey, Lonesome?
You said it, right....
PAGE 10:
Panel1:
You'd be coming back...
That's why, you came back
Panel2:
──but
Panel3:
He went out without saying anthing...
Panel4-Panel5:
...
...you will come back, right...?
...
Panel5:
~...right
right~?
shut up
?
PAGE 11:
Panel1:
Shut up, you useless dog!!
It's because my whole body is full of sweat and sticky blood~
Let's hurry up and enter the hot spring, I want to feel good~!!
Hm? You want to feel good
That's not it, stupid!!
!!
Panel2:
...
Hey
Joze
Panel3:
...
Panel4:
Welcome back
PAGE 12:
Panel1:
Eeeeh
We're going to leave already~??
Panel2:
I don't wannaaa~
I still want to enter the hot spriiing~
Shut up useless dog
You've already stayed long enough
Panel3:
... you're leaving already?
?
Panel4:
...yeah
We're still in the middle of our journey
sfx: boo boo
PAGE 13:
Panel1:
Panel2:
The last few days since you've come
It's always been fun
...I see
Panel3:
...
...?
Panel4:
Say, if it's fine with you──uhm
Panel5:
...
PAGE 14:
Panel1:
...no, it's nothing
You seems to be a wanderer
So I can't be possibly restraining you
Panel2:
...
...
Orion?
Panel3:
Where are you heading now?
Panel4:
....
Panel5:
...where am I heading to? That's obvious
PAGE 15:
Panel1:
Panel2:
Panel3:
Towards to where the sun set
Their destination is unknown!!
Their never ending journey still continue!!
Panel2:
──gaah
Gyaaaaagahahaha──
Gubaeaaah!!
side note: The agonizing cries of the corrupted feudal lord
Panel3:
...eek!!
Panel4:
Why──
Panel5:
Why...
PAGE 2:
Panel1-Panel2:
Why is this happening──
PAGE 3:
Panel1:
My men
My assets
My mansion
Panel2:
All of them are gone
...why!?
Panel3:
Panel4:
...woman
PAGE 4:
Panel1:
By just laying a hand on a one woman
Panel2:
Because of that woman──
Panel3:
He...
He──lp
──me
!?
Panel4:
Eeeep!!
Panel5:
Panel6:
...!!
Eeeek
PAGE 5:
Panel1:
Panel2:
sfx: door closed
Panel3:
!!
Wwha!?
The door...
Open the door!!
Shiiit!!
Now... that all of them are settled
Panel4:
...!!
Aa...ah
Panel5:
You're the only one left
PAGE 6:
Panel1:
Sorry, I made you wait Darling ♡
PAGE 7:
Panel1:
...what's this
such big and fat thing
where did you...
Panel2:
I don't...
I don't want to die
Please... forgive me
I still... don't want to die
Panel3:
......
PAGE 8:
Panel1:
DIE
PAGE 9:
Panel1:
Panel2-Panel3:
...hey, Lonesome?
You said it, right....
PAGE 10:
Panel1:
You'd be coming back...
That's why, you came back
Panel2:
──but
Panel3:
He went out without saying anthing...
Panel4-Panel5:
...
...you will come back, right...?
...
Panel5:
~...right
right~?
shut up
?
PAGE 11:
Panel1:
Shut up, you useless dog!!
It's because my whole body is full of sweat and sticky blood~
Let's hurry up and enter the hot spring, I want to feel good~!!
Hm? You want to feel good
That's not it, stupid!!
!!
Panel2:
...
Hey
Joze
Panel3:
...
Panel4:
Welcome back
PAGE 12:
Panel1:
Eeeeh
We're going to leave already~??
Panel2:
I don't wannaaa~
I still want to enter the hot spriiing~
Shut up useless dog
You've already stayed long enough
Panel3:
... you're leaving already?
?
Panel4:
...yeah
We're still in the middle of our journey
sfx: boo boo
PAGE 13:
Panel1:
Panel2:
The last few days since you've come
It's always been fun
...I see
Panel3:
...
...?
Panel4:
Say, if it's fine with you──uhm
Panel5:
...
PAGE 14:
Panel1:
...no, it's nothing
You seems to be a wanderer
So I can't be possibly restraining you
Panel2:
...
...
Orion?
Panel3:
Where are you heading now?
Panel4:
....
Panel5:
...where am I heading to? That's obvious
PAGE 15:
Panel1:
Panel2:
Panel3:
Towards to where the sun set
Their destination is unknown!!
Their never ending journey still continue!!
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So is the princess also the old lady/queen or something? I’m confused by the “i’ve waited 50 years” line that she said since she obviously isn’t that old. On top of her being identical to the old woman when she wasn’t that age.
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