The Hawk's Song - Ch. 4 - Act 1 - Prophecy

[MangaDex]

 

[LowSanity]

Looks interesting, i'm gonna give it a try.

 

[YerRob]

Not criticizing, just putting this up in case you wanna reference:
- don't go to war
- start retaking our lost lands back
- this is the last war I'm going on for money
- who's she?
- did you go to that witch again?
- what does believing in superstition have in common with my own good?
Not sure whats being said in p16, but i think:
- should i remind you how you were taking care of us?
- when i leave / once I'm gone
- I'll bleed to death / I'll bleed out
- i didn't say to death

 

[KirieSempai]

@YerRob thanks for help! I'm not native speaker so I'm doing stupid mistakes, I fixed those and I'll use it on other platforms cause I can't upgrade it here :/

 

[YerRob]

@KirieSempai As a non native speaker myself i can understand it being a wee bit hard at first, but overall the "intent" behind their speech seemed pretty well translated, so I'd say it's pretty good.
Thank you for the story, looking forward to more

 

[The_first_heretic]

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!