Amahara should stick to comedy, he's the kind of guy that can come out with pretty good concepts but can't write for shit
He can't properly structure a plot nor make characters, just parodies.
That's why reviewers works, every chapter introduces new interesting one note characters that are interesting but that we never see again because they don't matter to what little thread thin plot there is (e.i. the old pixie slut, the grill girl salamander or the hyena dickgirl, interesting and fun worldbuilding but irrelevant for the overall plot)
tldr: this is trash