I wasn't gonna complain, but since everyone else is doing it... this dialogue is hard to read. In a random fantasy manga it would be fine since it's not like there's any hidden meaning to grasp anyway, but in a manga like this where they keep making leaps of logic and inferring meaning from things that aren't being said, it's becoming a problem. I had to re-read pages 28-33 a couple of times to figure out what exactly they were talking about, and I still only have a guess rather than actually KNOWING WHAT IS BEING SAID, because what is actually on the page barely makes sense. And that's before getting into nitpicks like incorrect pluralisation, tenses, and the occasional modal verb (it's not "there is a possibility this will happen", it's either "there exists a possibility that this might happen" or "this might possibly happen").
also, when everyone else is wearing parody names, it's obvious the not-soviets are not going to be called the Russian federation. Like, come on, editor, catch something.