The Shocking Reality of A Loan Shark Collecting Money

[SweetJelly]

 

[Swadloon]

so cozy!

 

[Kiruzu]

yay

 

[DANDAN_THE_DANDAN]

Alternate ending is better fite me m8

 

[bassgs]

The alt ending was the real ending all along

 

[dal78]

pls delete chapter 8, we now have a true end. Hail 8.5!

 

[Dropkick]

Ch 8 - I cri evrytiem
Ch 8,5 - Feels good

 

[grom]

in the "official" ending, is the loan shark a homeless guy ? he seem pretty worn out

 

[aldeous]

both end are perfect, ty for translating this <3

 

[GilgameshWulfenbach]

Should have been an ending where he just marries the mom since the kid doesn't want to leave her.

 

[Grenzoocoon]

This ending is so much better.

 

[comicbookguy]

Thanks for translating this.😀

 

[Solipsist]

I knew it was worth to keep my tabs on this one.

 

[CyanHide]

@GilgameshWulfenbach

That’s just Chapter 9 alternate ending 2

 

[YuzuCSH]

"comedy" they said...
"just a light hearted comedy" they said...

this was short. too short. but it was one hell of an emotional roller coaster all the way to the end

 

[sparhawk5]

Glad we got a real ending, the other one was terrible.

 

[grandurr]

let's just say we never saw chapter 8 and only saw 8.5

 

[Kiraidesu]

Going against the grain here, but I find this kind of story doesn't really work as a twitter comic. The twitter comics are fine experiments of short form storytelling, but they are not good at get-to-know-you character drama.

It's Capitalized Archetypes ("Loan Shark Thug with a Kind Side," "Pitiful Little Girl," "Asshole Mom") doing Capitalized Archetypes things, and the plot walks through the straightforward tearjerker route. A, then B, then C, now please cry. The characters aren't really characters beyond their literal Capitalized Archetype descriptions.

Not that short form comics can't tell character dramas or even sweeping epics, but they need different techniques, stylized expressiveness, a touch of poetry. They can't be drawn like your typical manga-just-with-fewer-pages like this one is.

 

[Shinway]

Great short read, 8.5 is based ending for me.

 

[Al333]

both endings were good