Reading the ln and god damn is the mc retarded, he's like a neutron star and sloth from the goonies had a baby. He just gets dumber, and dumber and dumber as time goes on. Then you have to sit through several pages of the mc's inane inner monologue about the current situation about which he's always fucking wrong. And not only is he dumb, he's fucking stupid, and the worst kind of insufferable chuuni.