The Strongest Wizard Becomes a Countryside Guardsman After Taking an Arrow to the Knee - Ch. 13.2 - I was the Strongest Sorcerer. And Then I Returned…

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Thanks for picking this up! I actually re-read this today and then the manga gets updated.
 
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lol, guys i just did this for fun~ well, thnkz for reading my translation, and please do leave a comment on the place where i made mistake

~ happy reading :3
 
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yeah it's a bit awkward. also, spanish inverted exclamation mark. rookie spanish-to-english mistake stuff. i'll leave the rest to point out what could be fixed
 
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Another thanks for picking this up. I didn't notice any problems with the translation. I do wonder about the wisdom of building a wearhouse for dragon materials. Isn't that going to be a big target for thieves?
 
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I think you did a good job at the translation overall. The only things I found odd were a few pronouns. Especially the 'they' at the start when Millet was talking about staying up. I think that should have been 'we'( same with vivi saying you instead of they) .
Now I can't read Japanese, but I do know that they omit pronouns in most cases, so I'm just speculating as Millet not sleeping either makes more sense to me story-wise.
 
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@jsenecal who would know as it is in the country side also mc could put trap/enchantment/barrier on the building or get the wolf (forget name) to guard it
 
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Thanks for the update! Nothing wrong with translation(meaning no typos or logic errors, i wouldn't know if the translation itself is flawed since i don't know japanese, nor seen raws)
 

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