I like the concept of story. this kind of "transmigrate to otome game/video game/book story" already a bunch in the market, but this one is kinda unique for me. not only because both Yao and Lan keep their memories and awareness from real world, but they also going back to real world at the end of story. plus they married before going back to real world. but this makes me wonder, would they be missed after come back to the real world? I mean, Kay and Ada are disappeared from that world right? I don't know, the author didn't explain about this. I like the story, dynamic between characters, character development between Kay and Ada, and even all the characters are appeared at the final battle. overall I like the story. but there are 2 things that I really dislike:
1. the time skip two years is so stupid and silly. I know this get justified in the story that Ada get house jail due to sentence from council. isn't that false accusation that she acquinted with demon lord? and those a$$hole council didn't get any kind of karma for doing this. but more importantly, there is no guaranteed that Kay/Lan's soul didn't get swallowed by Valerie during that two years. it's only Noa who said that "Kay won't get defeated that easily", really? how he can get sure about that? oh speaking of Noa, he is my 2nd point of complaining
2. Noa become the final boss didn't get any kind of building, setup and clues. he just simply appear at the final battle and took the bad guy mantle. what's his motivation? he just want to took away all magic and makes sure only his academy people who can use magic. yeah, that's so silly because his academy already so prestiguous from the first place. and if people know about this, his academy will be hated and no one will going there. and as the final kick on the butt, we didn't get to see what kind of punishment for his action. seriously what a disappoinment

due to those two fatal flaws, I only give my rating 9/10. if not for those two, I'll give either 9.5 or 9.8 because I already like the overall story. oh and also I'll mention the last 9 chapters (92 - 100), which just extras. basically someday/years after Yao and Lan come back to real world, Madelaine, Purya and Valerie get reincarnated to real world as little girls and live together with our mc couple. which is really cute and sweet. but those extras are totally separated from the main story. still nice to read tho.
