page 4 :
- a cute girl calls these 2 boys "senpai-s" , so they cum in their pants , lol .
- this line sounds so wrong : however , more powerful **** might still "penetrate" my protective hymen , er , barrier ...
page 7 : her imaginary , adult version has a very long ahoge hair .
page 9 : their lines sound so wrong :
- i came with a lot of my male friends today , to "play" with you .
- i need your "help" with my "problems" again .
- i heard you are "curious" about high school "classes" , would you like me to "teach" you ?