b4 i not here, ima just maybe read more comments later cuz i'm not happy, .
like atht
srry nvm i' save and c later it became tldr qq
, regardless, the not mcs rly r just 2 young children without proper upbringings, so maybe medumb as usual, but i do not see any reason to hate them, although the last bit was strange since it was too simple while -pretentious? at the same time sincei getthat it is a 'one page short' so it won't go into what happened, however the need to go into, "oh they wanted to be bad children- and so this happened and they can be temp miserable and lose their monogamy*" at the end is(imo -EDT) a cheap, oh here is ur revenge story cuz it'll get ppl off, even though it could've ended with they were transfered away and it wouldn't make a difference, like, i did enjoy the villainess expressions, but it all felt like an afterthought tacked on at the end for reasons, but, i guess i wouldn't care about it if it wasn't also an awkward and not intentional attempt at making bisexual poly look bad. then again considering this story they all prob were very happy and then the cycle w ill continue with the not mcs forcing the 2 to 'commit adultery' as foreshadowed with the whole, "id hate it u cheat- I QWILL NVR U CHEAT cuz, ..." flags need to flag? idk, i suppose i'm just sad that polyamory isn't 'actually' popular at all, since to this day i still has no idea what harems / the genre are supposed to esp considering for most cases the haerm members, often tend to not actually even like him/her, mc< =lol srry i just realised that we can force our way into the "mf ing dragon cult" by claiming that ‘MAINCHARACTER’ is a gender in and of itself, maybe we can use it to replace (what was it again, zee, zhayy? idek) sry mc off topic
regardless, i get salt t poly wouldn't be a "reasonable" market demo , and therefore turning all 4 chars of this oneshot poly wouldn't sell, so the continuation of this could only every be fict ional;
but yea idk tl dr happy not relevant royalty 's story cont. when DW? \
vasically arbitrafry hadthe2ppl in charge be ?evil ¿ at the end feels arbit but y is it a bad thing that the solier queen want both? edit?