Though I May Be a Villainess, I'll Show You I Can Obtain Happiness! - Vol. 9 Ch. 2 - After My Engagement Was Broken Off, My Unknown Brother Came Char…

[MangaDex]

 

[HelloKitty1000]

why do the characters look so god damn stiff

 

[l0liconn]

I apologize for the long wait, this chapter took a while.

Spoiler

IMO, This is by far the worst chapter in this anthology, not volume. And it's also quite hard for me to edit because of the text bubbles placement and whatnot. I'm sorry, I'll do better next chapter.

 

[l0liconn]

why do the characters look so god damn stiff

ikr

 

[HelloKitty1000]

ikr

Honestly only the text was the readable part the art was so subpar i was cringing so hard.

 

[Caribou31]

Thanks for your works.

The story is too long for the talent of his author...

 

[lol126]

Wow. This chapter went from “oh boy this would be decent” to “wow this is making me cringe real hard”

Everything was moving too fast and the art was kinda stiff. I feel like we need at least five more chapters for this to work

 

[Kaiser92]

Thought this was an Alabama oneshot

 

[reteryisk]

Feels like there's small nuggets of something that could've been fun here, but every other element from the art to the pacing was so nonsensical and bad, like someone wrote it in ten minutes after reading every other chapter in the anthology while half-asleep

 

[Eliminateur]

Feels like there's small nuggets of something that could've been fun here, but every other element from the art to the pacing was so nonsensical and bad, like someone wrote it in ten minutes after reading every other chapter in the anthology while half-asleep

Pretty much this, so far i'm feeling that vol 9 is pretty weak, last chapter was the weakest and this one is even worse, the pacing is all over the place.

 

[panzerkampfwagyu]

I liked the first part, where she utterly trolled the hell out off the prince and his hoe.
The ML was both unnecessary to resolve and kinda fudged it up by not letting her do her thing
Kind of a shame, really, would've liked the first part to be the story

 

[Kisekifan]

This is so confusing and rushed, I have no idea what was going on and also cringing so hard at the same time.

 

[MissT]

got secondhand embarrassment so bad

 

[KitRagnell]

Yea I don't like this chapter. The rest of the anthology has been kino tho

 

[catbot158]

It’s not a good chapter, but I had fun. Maybe it’s cause I’m weak to schmaltzy crap like this lol 😅

 

[tseng]

Thanks for the chapter

This one was kinda uh, but one thing i noticed, is seeing some of these faceless people in some other works out there too, like manhwas, are they like stock designs you paste lmao

 

[notekatha]

This was... Bad. In almost every regard. The story made no sense, the art is all over the place, and it was evidently trying to make fun of tropes while using them entirely serious.

 

[CrimsonNanashi]

Chapter was very chaotic and random

 

[speedysam0]

Yeah, definitely not a good story with this one. When the guy shows up, suddenly nobody else has any significant dialogue besides the girl? Seriously that’s putting way too much on the artist to draw reactions.
This guy could be an actual villain the way he’s wielding his powers as a threat to everyone while he stalks this girl and kidnaps her.

 

[mako992]

Thanks for translating!

gosh this series are usually sooo good that this chapter just stood out for being awful in all aspect.