I think there's indeed a slight issue between the last panel of page 1 (where Ikezawa refers to interpreting the author) and the first panel of page 2 (where Eguchi responds as if Ikezawa had talked about anything but interpreting the author). But by writing your feedback in such a rude way, you all but ensure that indeed no-one will care about it.
you gotta admit that would be a bold way to finish (the series)
I'm sorry it took you my post to realize it and made you self-conscious about your reading comprehension level, that was clearly rude of me. Learning from my mistake, I will refrain from pointing out the absence of internal consistency in your reply. 🧑🦼
Well, sometimes tasks like this get to ridiculous levels, but usually writing has more depth and nuance than the usual slop you read. You just wouldn't know
Bud there are about 100 other series that pull that NTR-bait, it’s never well done and it’s always a slog. It always just makes the character in question feel indecisive and insincere. There’s dozens of better ways to push progress, not to mention we’re already getting good progress between the leads. You do not need a shitty third party in a rom com.
Calm down. It’s fiction. It’s not really ntr bait. Just makes things better. If it’s ntr bait I wouldn’t mind.
There has never been a single rom com that’s been improved by introducing a secondary love interest*. They exist to slow progress, take up page time, cause unnecessary drama and then ultimately either lose or cling around to be annoying forever. Anything they could contribute to the story can be better served by a friend, family member, side couple, or convenient rain storm.
