Totsugi Okureta Kitsune ga Yome ni Kuru Hanashi - Vol. 4 Ch. 40 - Does He Love Me?

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No, that's not Mogami-san on the last page! That's a new character, a guy who's Yutsuyu-san's roommate and...? The author does kind of have a 'default face' for short haired black haired people, which might be one reason he got rid of Mogami-san's glasses, since now there's this new character with glasses.

Next time: All actual Mogami-san. And after that: all Frecklefox (Mugi-chan)!
 
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I'm not a professional, but I think that on page 3 where we have "person in charge of them", having "person in charge", and "of them" on separate bubbles looks strange.
 
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The author does kind of have a 'default face' for short haired black haired people
...and how.

Good that the older neighbor and Goro are both aware the other knows about Kogane, though that does rule out the possibility of a chapter or two of zany confusion on that front.

Thanks for the chapter!
 
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I am interested to see what pushes Goro to confess to Kogane. What threshold does he need to cross? He's clearly looking for something.
I am all aboard for an oops, all Mogami-san chapter.
 
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At some point Goro is going to need to tell her he "aishiteru" Kogane, but I think he's getting there. He threw himself in front of her for that monster fox, after all.
I wonder how long they've been together as of right now.
 
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@sarusa I was surprised when I saw you mention your Tsumiki Ogami notes, but I went and checked and there you are on the credits page. Thank you for your service. :salute:
 
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I'm not a professional, but I think that on page 3 where we have "person in charge of them", having "person in charge", and "of them" on separate bubbles looks strange.
That was because the right bubble was over packed, so I moved some over to the left bubble. Will look at splitting it better.
 
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I like that the stalker wasnt just forgotten after his arc and moved on, but instead we're shown that his actions and words have had an impact. Then at the same time we see Kogane moving past that and refusing his premise. She's recognizing how she forced the current relationship and then actively choosing to make the best of it and working to make him genuinely love her back.

Man i wish modern couples thought like that...

On a more positive note:
Oh man im really looking forward to spider wife in the coming chapters as well!!
 
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@sarusa I was surprised when I saw you mention your Tsumiki Ogami notes, but I went and checked and there you are on the credits page. Thank you for your service. :salute:
Yes, Tsumiki Ogami is my main 'job' (translator) and my first scanslation with a Real Group ™️. Been doing it since Boneless Sushi dropped it (chapter 9). It gets priority when a chapter drops.

This is my personal pet side project because Booklive offered it to me and I was Intrigued, and the chapters were short enough for me to do one entirely on my own in a day. Though as of this volume they're twice as long as they used to be! It gives me something to do while the other ETC members work on their dozens of other projects. It lets me practice my clean/redraw and typesetting skills. Aaaand of course at this point I'm committed to seeing what happens to our two doofuses.
 
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Really appreciate your notes here and in Ogami. It’s fun to learn a little at the end of a read
 

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