"Touto sugite Yomenaaaaaaai!!" 4P Short Stories - Vol. 1 Ch. 11 - Household of Two [By tunral]

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Read the 1st page

"Oh, it gonna be deep, doesn't it?"

I was right, I wish I wasn't.
 
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The way it makes the reader reread the story is pretty damn clever and impressive, its like the story is made to be read in reverse 10/10 short story
 
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Fuck.

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Definitely the best chapter for me. It's a different take on "too precious and hard to read", yes, and for me it's refreshing and original. The execution is great as well. I especially love that it was told backwards, something rarely seen in mangas, and it was very effective.
The extra page with "I'm here" hit me even harder. Such a nice touch.
 

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