Trample on the River of Immortality - Ch. 13

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didnt the lady have black hair,how did it become yellow/orange 😆
 
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Man, this girl don't turn into a thot, but judging by the cover maybe she will be waifu.
 
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@Piyush123 Well, the MC turning down her marriage proposal is kinda a hit to her honor as a woman in this setting. Though, I can understand the MC, too.
 
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two years ago he was too old to reach high cultivation level, and now he raised one minor realm two years later and he is not too old anymore?
Also the father conveniently punishing him locking him up on the only place that he could make use of his cheating ability. Second brother coming to see him coincidentially on the same time that MC decides to leave.

plot is too weak >.< hoping for improvements here.
 
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Hahaha, reading their actual dialogue hurts my eyes.

Who thought that writing like this was a good idea.

I'm infinitesimally close to dropping this just from reading this chapter. It was that painful.
 

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