Tsuihou Sareta Akuyaku Reijou to Tensei Danshaku no Slow de Fushigi na Kekkon Seikatsu - Vol. 1 Ch. 6

[MangaDex]

 

[InkuNinja]

If you guys notice anything off, let me know because I'm doing this quickly whenever I have time.

 

[InkuNinja]

And oh! Another pervert has been spotted. -_-

 

[shinshom]

and she finally shows up XD..... so proud of her body lol

 

[rookgard]

sooooo... she's basically a Yandere? this is just a guess, but if she "kills the love interest", depending of the route, does that mean she "fell in love" with said love interest, and because the person didn't return the love, she went crazy and killed him?

 

[Mandobard]

Did anyone just notice in our lead’s flashbacks that the game heroine

Spoiler: Speculation

Looks an awful lot like Grey? And it’s been pointed out the one in our Femc’s memory doesn’t match?

 

[Danwoo]

If you're gonna show nipples go all the way. Like in https://mangadex.org/title/13ccde4b...81a1/elf-to-bike-to-teikoku-chiri-chousain-to. Thats how you do it.

 

[essensue]

If you guys notice anything off, let me know because I'm doing this quickly whenever I have time.

p22, last bubble, compare himself to her, or compare Violet to her? I'll admit, it's funnier the first way.

 

[Wolvenworks]

Oh no…a narcissistic exhibitionist yandere. That’s deep in the crazy zone.

 

[isoycrazy]

Well, this can't go wrong. Let her come to your place.

 

[AnotherDuck]

I don't like this mysterious person just being there to give our heroine some negative confidence. It's like they can't trust her to not have things to get over on her own without that.

Wolf lady's a bit full of herself. Though she has a full figure, so it's okay.

If she's a character who kills the love interest, they should be fine. In fact, they may even have protection in case some love interest should be sent their way with hostile intentions.

If you guys notice anything off, let me know because I'm doing this quickly whenever I have time.

Schwarz's clothes are all off. No need to fix, though.

 

[Xakorik]

Sometimes nipples, sometimes no nipples?

 

[S0LUS]

Just picked up this series, and... well, I'm not gonna pin all the blame on the translators, thank you for the chapters and all (though your typesetting is atrocious lol) but am I alone in feeling like this manga has the pace and tone of a fucking fever dream thus far?

 

[InkuNinja]

Just picked up this series, and... well, I'm not gonna pin all the blame on the translators, thank you for the chapters and all (though your typesetting is atrocious lol) but am I alone in feeling like this manga has the pace and tone of a fucking fever dream thus far?

Are you going to translate the series? I'll be making a way for you. Maybe it's because I only use one font on every chapter to be honest as lazy as I am to cut cost and anything that can make the manga better is good 👍

 

[notekatha]

Just picked up this series, and... well, I'm not gonna pin all the blame on the translators, thank you for the chapters and all (though your typesetting is atrocious lol) but am I alone in feeling like this manga has the pace and tone of a fucking fever dream thus far?

Absolutely. It definitely feels like it wants to be a parody of a parody while not taking anything seriously enough to let the readers breathe. While that can be funny, without any time for set-up, it's hard to feel anything beyond "wtf"

 

[S0LUS]

Are you going to translate the series? I'll be making a way for you. Maybe it's because I only use one font on every chapter to be honest as lazy as I am to cut cost and anything that can make the manga better is good 👍

I get that tone is hard to convey in text so I want to clarify that I'm genuinely grateful for your work, like I said, and I'm not blaming you for how bizarre the pacing and tone of the story is. The remark about the typesetting probably came off worse than intended, as I was just making a lighthearted jab- even you have to agree that having text leave speech bubbles and stuff like that isn't premium work lol- but it's nothing that truly damages anyone's ability to comprehend the story or anything, and the fact you're doing this at all is enough to excuse any amount of "lazy" decisions (as you put it) like that. Sorry if I sounded more hostile towards you than intended, I was really only aggravated by the story itself lol

Absolutely. It definitely feels like it wants to be a parody of a parody while not taking anything seriously enough to let the readers breathe. While that can be funny, without any time for set-up, it's hard to feel anything beyond "wtf"

Yeah, that's exactly what I meant, thank you! some of the decisions made (and the pace they're made at) just makes this such a confusing read, lol. Even if I can logically follow the series of events, I'm still left wondering "but why though?"

 

[notekatha]

Yeah, that's exactly what I meant, thank you! some of the decisions made (and the pace they're made at) just makes this such a confusing read, lol. Even if I can logically follow the series of events, I'm still left wondering "but why though?"

I would love to pick this author's brain about this story. There's some good elements, but so much of it is obscured in insanity that it's hard to understand.

 

[AMicrowave]

Shiver me titties, that's some fine booty

 

[DarekaNa]

Wotdahellll... Abooba...

 

[lovolo]

Did anyone just notice in our lead’s flashbacks that the game heroine

Spoiler: Speculation

Looks an awful lot like Grey? And it’s been pointed out the one in our Femc’s memory doesn’t match?

Oh shit, a plot twist of ogFL being different and white lotus?

I get that tone is hard to convey in text so I want to clarify that I'm genuinely grateful for your work, like I said, and I'm not blaming you for how bizarre the pacing and tone of the story is. The remark about the typesetting probably came off worse than intended, as I was just making a lighthearted jab- even you have to agree that having text leave speech bubbles and stuff like that isn't premium work lol- but it's nothing that truly damages anyone's ability to comprehend the story or anything, and the fact you're doing this at all is enough to excuse any amount of "lazy" decisions (as you put it) like that. Sorry if I sounded more hostile towards you than intended, I was really only aggravated by the story itself lol


Yeah, that's exactly what I meant, thank you! some of the decisions made (and the pace they're made at) just makes this such a confusing read, lol. Even if I can logically follow the series of events, I'm still left wondering "but why though?"

True, feels like it's clumsily set up plot points like the suspicious woman in previous chapter and now another yandere villainess?