Tsuihou Sareta Saikyou Seijo wa, Machi de Slow Life wo Okuritai! - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Thanks for the translation ❤️
Honestly hope there more chapters of her getting settled and living a good life before the MC shows up but he's already appears in the first chapter 😔
 
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the guys registered the new girl as their new member 2-3 months ago? sounds like this "screw up" was just an excuse they were waiting for. why is Felicia acting all buddy buddy with MC when she's no different than the hero group? she was there when MC was kicked out, never spoke up and stared at her with the same cold dead eyes.
 
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@Doomer I don't think the artist intended that to be a 'cold' look in Felicia's eyes. It looked to me like she was holding her tongue. Probably didn't want to say anything in front of the 'replacement' due to suspicions, because of how everyone else was acting.
 
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Thanks for the chapter!
Betcha dollars to doughnuts the party is going to be in real trouble without MC. Also, the party seems too against Lina over stupid misconceptions considering how long they partied for. Kanae is probably not going to be up to par with Lina, especially if she doesn't have any combat experience in the field. That's assuming she didn't use some trick to turn the others against Lina and is trying to sabotage the hero party for some reason. Anyone know why having black hair and red eyes was so significant that MC noted them? Like is it reminiscent of demons or something? If common MC would've hardly paid attention to that and more on being replaced so quickly. It's good MC getting back on her feet but some kind of incident is bound to happen. That and the dragon rider at the end is probably a noble or prince with a one sided crush for her.
 
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@talas I agree. I have seen this kind of thing a lot. If it was me, I would make no romance in this series. Just let the girl be, she doesn’t need love to stay alive. It likes as if women can never live without love. I am a man and I have utmost respect to women. So, seeing them being conquered by this guy and that guy one after another makes me feel bad. And she has just suffered the betrayal of her love interest too.
 

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I don't have any complaints, and instead complements for doing this good without either language being your first. I've read TLs that just toss everything through Google translate and toss it over the previous text with nothing but a white highlight. Keep it up.
 
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Ty so much for the translation, no need to apologise for anything! This is giving me Shield Hero vibes in the sense that everybody will utterly useless without her around wich is such an annoying trope...
 
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Seems like a nice series but the translation is just "off" in so many places.

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Just in case anyone thinks I'm picking on the poor TL, let me give two or three examples after checking the raws.

E.g. page 3
Guy: "It's just an ordinary injury, also hurting Saintess-sama's hand is a bad thing after all."

but it should really say, "I wouldn't want to get hurt and have to waste the Saintess's precious time, now would I?" or something sarcastic like that.

The misinterpreted text is "手を煩わす" which means "to cause a person trouble." Nothing about the Saintess getting hurt.

page 5
Guy: "Even though we always have fun, it's too much trouble to assist you."

but actually he's following from what Charles says about Lina wanting to rest and sarcastically adding, "To think you'd be too lazy to travel with us even though you're always taking it easy in the rear guard."

page 12
Charles made the party changes 2 or 3 DAYS ago, not months.
etc. etc.

And that's just from a casual glance over.
 
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i've fixed the mistakes that you pointed out, as well as added a warning that it was mtl.
if there are any more issues with the chapter, please feel free to comment on my group's comments section here: https://mangadex.org/group/14064/glass-hearts-scans or slide in to my mail.
 
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I'm not sure if this will be good, but I'm aboard for now. The fact that the party is at least split following the decision to exile the protag gives me some hope of nuance.
 
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In my opinion, the drawing is just mediocre(maybe, a little bad too, but not so appaling). So, I have some predictions and possible questions. First, that black haired girl might be a transmigrator with memory-altering skills. Second, is using restoration magic is limited to objects or can it be used on living creatures, too? Third, what is the secret of youth behind Felicia? Last, but not the least is that black haired guy an mc? He might be some omnipotent creature who can turn back time and had close contact with FL in previous lifetime. Or he he might have reborned and was in close contact with the FL. Or he might have transmigrated in this(possibly novel’s) world and is in love with that character.
 
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Currently, this only has a rating of 6.82. I'm quite confused because similar stories to this have around 7 or 8. And there's not really anything a certain amount of people would be offended by ( I still remember the original reception of Cheating Men Must Die) .
 
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generic story, generic art, generic MC

Really not a stunning opener from this manga huh, I actually liked mage lady so who knows. Why do we never get milf MC's anyway? Who wouldn't read a story about mommy mage just dunkin on the fools that try to step to her experience. Damn now I want to read that and so do you, in fact you aren't even thinking about the chapter u just read anymore. Cause its generic and forgettable...
 
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This is extremely boring. It has nothing going for it. Basically, if you replace "kicked out of party" with "break engagement " then you have every story in this genre EVER. It doesn't help that the art is boring as well and even the ML has the cliché fiancé...this is like a story that has every single shojo cliché
 

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