Tsuihou Suru Gawa no Monogatari

[MangaDex]

 

[tgonzalez8677]

Need more chapters, The suspense is killing me.
Need to find out? What happens next?.

 

[RiasatSenpai]

Need more chapters, The suspense is killing me.
Need to find out? What happens next?.

i feel ya lol

 

[EnderWin]

ok surely the actual translation of the English text isn't like this, right?

 

[SwordsnWards]

God I hope the romance tag isn't for the swordsman with the scar

 

[RiasatSenpai]

God I hope the romance tag isn't for the swordsman with the scar

feels like it will be

 

[1King2OA4M]

People on NU are flaming this; it’s apparently a bad take on the Banished From Party trope

 

[Zincrow]

feels like it will be

If it's gonna be like that, I'll drop it for sure.
For now I'll just wait and see

 

[Timewaster_zoltar]

i thought it was going to be like " instead the party being the cocky arrogant bastards, they are actually the good/decent people and the banished guy is actually the " it would have been WAY better than whatever the hell this story is going to be

 

[Zincrow]

That's it. Im dropping this. Just sneak a peek at raw and... I decided to drop it here.

 

[monzo99]

they could just tell the reason why he got kicked, but nooooo
dropped, what a waste of time

 

[JTMad]

Hope the Author losses his arms.

 

[JTMad]

People on NU are flaming this; it’s apparently a bad take on the Banished From Party trope

Its a god level shit on the Banished From Party trope.
Shit like this is modern day DC level. it's going to kill all interest in small Author.

 

[CreamPieGuy91]

Yeah I read the raws as the premise made no sense to me. She wants to kick him out because she doesnt want to see him die. Yet she knows he wont quit, so having the person hate her and be out of her life yet still be in equal if not more danger is a better outcome? They also try to paint the older swordsman as a saint yet he developed feelings for 15 year old girl half his age. It becomes too predictable.

 

[CreamPieGuy91]

God I hope the romance tag isn't for the swordsman with the scar

Well it says I think it chapter two that the banished kid was in love the leader. But he never tells her. The leader ends up starting to like the old dude and the other way(girl looks like a girl he loved that died)but even they don’t really get together. It was a mess.

 

[Istvan90623]

It had been years since I 1 starred any manga, this earned it rightfully in a mere 6 chapters.

 

[Bigz5000]

Bro I feel bad for the guy they kickout,
He just wanna advanture with them, but they saw him as a weak member cuz they care for him, bruhhh if the author this guy die I really gonna sue this manga💀,

 

[thirty7timeslucky]

holy shit 4.88⭐️ what the hell happened here 😭

 

[Mizerie]

As someone who read the raws, this story doesn't deserve to get adapted to manga format. The original WN is a painful read and checking on the chapters, it might have potential but it gets squandered by somewhat unappealing writing.

 

[YamiryuuZero]

holy shit 4.88⭐️ what the hell happened here 😭

After reading the 9 available chapters, I can tell exactly what happened here: the author doesn't understand the consequences of the choices he made, so he ended up making the protagonists a bunch of hypocrites, managed to victim-blame, and painted the worst character of the group - the oldest swordsman - as the morally righteous main character.

The art is good, the pacing is good, but the protagonists are just a bunch of inconsiderate hypocrites who paint their terrible choices as the harsh but righteous path, and only end up making the victim in this story, Est, seem like an unreasonable asshole.

The readers aren't buying that crap. That's why it has a score of 4.83 now, even lower than it was when you posted your comment.