Tsuki 50-man Moratte mo Ikigai no nai Tonari no Onee-san ni 30-man de Yatowarete "Okaeri" tte Iu Oshigoto ga Tanoshii

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Plot in the second half doesn't make any sense and even the cute moments are replaced by "Guhuhu boobs"
 
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Yeah, this was all fun and cute for a bit, but then the author completely lost the plot and just kept throwing random nonsense at the reader. You could say that it is "slice of life" of some sort, but the slices now are completely randomly selected nonsense with no rhyme nor reason behind them. Was the author just completely out of ideas after the plushy arc? Have they replaced him with ChatGPT? Sure feels like it!
 
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Not sure how this resolves with only two chapters left.... is Mio and Yuuji going to figure out they met years ago. Will they admit their feelings for each other? How will it end? seems like axe-kun situation depending upon these last chapters.
 
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That was....cute but disappointing. Definitely a non-confession confession situation...the same crap Yuri/Girl Love pulls with their "roommates forever" bait endings. What annoys me more is now I gotta figure out how a person can enjoy something and hate it because thay's where I'm at...eff this manga, read it though.
 
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That was....cute but disappointing. Definitely a non-confession confession situation...the same crap Yuri/Girl Love pulls with their "roommates forever" bait endings. What annoys me more is now I gotta figure out how a person can enjoy something and hate it because thay's where I'm at...eff this manga, read it though.
Yep same feelings, the start was interesting and good but as many stated towards the mid point it became a drag. Author could use other mangas or books as reference for a good couples life (inserting fluffy slice of life moments) in order to prolong his series instead author decided to place idiocy and drama, it wasn't needed.

Some manga authors have a problem, some start without thinking about ending before hand(basically losing floor(fundament) eventually. Others know both things but because they need money they place a lot of fillers, drama n' shit that completely derails their presumed ending.
The most aggravating thing, author had both WN and LN before hand, yet he/she didn't take notes from the people. You already had WN for your creative freedom, create LN and manga in a manner people would enjoy it.
 

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