Uchi no Tsuma wa Wasureppoi

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I think it's a very cheap emotional shot, with terrible pacing.

It's like the tragedy equivalent of a jumpscare. You'll get the reaction you're looking for but it's not interesting.

Instead of a spooky creature jumping in front of the camera it's rapid onset Alzheimers.
 
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Well it’s a twitter oneshot. You can’t write meaningful development, with proper pacing for such a story in that format. For what it is, it did a relatively good job.
 
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The Tragedy is really forced. There was no happy ending and it f*cked him over for life... I guess it all depends on the Author. Some have the gift to give closure while others don't.
 
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for a 17 page oneshot, it certainly did its job well. pretty good shit.
 
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I was wondering why this suddenly one of the top manga, now i understand. But still, why? WHY?? WHYYY???
 
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made me remember this quote from Saw V
"You are my heart. You always have been. You always will be."

reading, while crying (On the inside), and listening to Theory Of A Deadman - Heaven (Little By Little)
 
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As touching as this is, it's not very accurate to how memory loss works. By the time memories like a lifelong companion are lost, they're a dribbling mess. Finding your way out of a new bathroom becomes a problem before that.
 
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@Ironclad For one family member of mine, that wasn't how it was. It may have just been a rare case, but my guess is that there are probably many different patterns for memory loss.
 

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