Until the End - Ch. 11 - The Truth That Couldn't Be Shared With Anyone

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SIgh... I liked the premise and all, but the story is really meandering at this point.
 

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@cache_bag right? And every chapter another hottie appears.

Although that might be the point, to keep you guessing
 
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Probably the teacher if he has his own place. Or the janitor, I guess.
 
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What annoys me the most is that we don't know if she saw his face or not. But since he blackmailed her, it's very likely she did.
 
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im really hoping that it's not the teacher nor the janitor because it would be too obvious
 
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Um...Excuse me?

She went to the hospital because she collapsed for no reason. It's likely they would have noticed the bruises, or other damages she received from the rape, such as the trauma to her genitals which is extremely common or the other signs. Hell, they most definitely would have noticed she was cutting herself.

Pretty sure most hospitals will do various physical assessments when someone collapses for no reason to figure out the cause, such as malnutrition or other factors. Hell, they'd check to see if she had a concussion or broken bones from the fall onto concrete and probably could see the evidence from the rape.

Think your shit through, author. (Also, if someone just collapses unconscious for no reason, don't just run in and pick up the body. Assess to see if there are any other dangerous elements first and call 911)
 

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