This one is losing me. The premise and the art are both cute, but it feels like there’s no stakes and nothing interesting is going on. I unfortunately don’t care what happens next and I have no expectations.
Not to say that manga (or any media) should only try to be one thing, but this is trying to be fluffy, horny, romance, and action, but the chapters are so short that it’s not really hitting any of those notes well, for me.
All that said, the translation feels very natural and reads like it was done with care, so I appreciate that work.