Urenokori no Dorei Elf o Hirotta no de, Musume ni Suru Koto ni shita - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

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I prefer Sieglinde for the friend, it feels a bit more authentically faux-German than the other version.

If you are planning to eventually continue this series, I would recommend dialing back the TL notes, or better yet just append them to the credits page. They disrupt the flow of reading and unless they offer really important context that would otherwise render a line unreadable, there's no need to keep them on the same page.
 
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Always appreciated what you release, perhaps ask for help when you can if the burden is too much. Some of us don't even bother reading the other translation and waiting on yours afterall.
 
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I didn't notice it before, because the other TL used Ziegline Floyd for her name, but her name Sieglinde Floid... seems awfully inspired by the name, Sigmund Freud. Like maybe the author was grasping at straws for another vaguely German-sounding name, opened a page listing famous Austrian/German people, and picked Sigmund Freud as inspiration. It doesn't help that she's a researcher/scientist...
 
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That face on pg6 would have defeated me as well. This child needs a mother.
 

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