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I like this story, its different and I'd even say unique, but... it has a couple (its early, so I expect there to be a lot more) unexplainable coincidences like the grandfather passing the jewelry to the granddaughter and now this guy. My hope is that it gets a reasonable explanation that ties the story together and not just a few random events that coincidentally occurred.