Idk sometimes not going all the way is hotter. Kinda like having lingerie on vs completely naked.
I guess it depends, if it is the "they would go all the way but suddenly someone/something interrupted them (and most likely caused pain to the MC)" or the "they were about to do it but the MC is too chicken to do a thing or too dense to notice" then i don't think it's hotter, but it could be just me being saturated with the "teasing only" type of ecchi manga/anime tho.
But if this manga ever get the guts to show her in full sexy lingerie then it would be hot, but i sadly doubt it, especially nowadays, like i said, a nipple would be impossible and a boob would be very rare, if only, i guess the most they can show was on chapter 1 sadly
Page 9, wtf? That's elementary standards? If so, then I'm a fucking fetus.
Those are definitely above average drawing skills.
Probably good for art but not good for manga? maybe that's what he meant, that the style are different