When I saw this for the first time it was on a YouTube video and I only got up too the packing to move part now atleast a couple of months later I find it by accident and was able to finish it it may have only been around and hour read but it was a great heartfelt story that captured me for every minute thank you for write this and sharing it with the world and I can’t wait to read the others you’ve done the same with
She went out with older people in uno and they “rped” herI don't really understand what happened to her, maybe because am a dumbass, but it looks like she failed her university and the pressure of that destroyed her.
Blond ?Man I’m so glad they’re gonna get married
I like how she’s just letting the pink hair dye go too and letting her blonde grow out
I think it's more of a sexual assault kinda implication.I think the artist is trying to subtly imply that
a. She became a slut b. She became a neet c. She became a drinker d. She became suicidal/started self harming or e. All of the above or a mix of some. Not super wholesome waifu material but she’s cute with big milkers so whatever.
Definitely a different direction then what this artist usually goes for, but a welcome one.
Hello? Trauma? Don’t underestimate how much a challenge trauma and PTSD is. Not everyone has the same effects and healing from it can be tough for some.It’s a simple story, however theres no real challenges that the characters face. Would have been nice to at least have some supporting characters to develop some kind of plot.
Everything was too simple, as a story eh its heartwarming but it falls short with nothing extra to support it. The story is basically the title with "and I married her and lived happily ever after" slapped on the end. The characters don't really struggle with their trauma or have hardships to build up their romance. Trauma and overcoming it makes an excellent character building point in a story, however this more feels like a "feelsgood" 4chan greentext. It's well done and conveys some feeling for a short story but it needs more.Hello? Trauma? Don’t underestimate how much a challenge trauma and PTSD is. Not everyone has the same effects and healing from it can be tough for some.
Haha, you're pretty bad at reading aren't you kid.Everything was too simple, as a story eh its heartwarming but it falls short with nothing extra to support it. The story is basically the title with "and I married her and lived happily ever after" slapped on the end. The characters don't really struggle with their trauma or have hardships to build up their romance. Trauma and overcoming it makes an excellent character building point in a story, however this more feels like a "feelsgood" 4chan greentext. It's well done and conveys some feeling for a short story but it needs more.
What are you talking about? Story is empty and the characters are deep as a thimble.Haha, you're pretty bad at reading aren't you kid.
What are you talking about? Story is empty and the characters are deep as a thimble.