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I understood next to nothing of this chapter. Who is that the guy in white suit enslaved?
Is the author John Madden?@Lekimno
Oh I assure for the author it's the opposite. They are long winded to a level that just infuriates and exhausts you from reading. In the first volume a conversation between him and a fellow student between hello ends up being 3 pages of him meandering on some topic. Or he elaborates on such an obvious concept. "Being ambushed is when you taken by surprise and can't react on time. The reason being that you were not expecting it. And in this case he came at a angle from his blindside which is where you cannot see it." And on and on.
I even bought the LN hoping an editor told the author to stop with the bloat but nope. It's worse. Good story but goodness you have to skim and skip so much irrelevant info.