Yasagure Shoukansha wa Ugokanai - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[BanzaiYuri]

Pleasantly generic.

 

[Ucluk4]

Mc Isekai as the hero.
Kill the demon King.
Get betrayed by human.
Destroy human kingdom.
Run away with a demon queen.

Why do I feel that MC’s mind is like that of a middle schooler more than a war veteran. Muh, I hate the world and everyone, only my beautiful demon queen wife is my ally

What is this ? A kid ?

P/S: I don't think he did anything wrong with destroyed the kingdom that forced him to fight or didn't accept the princess's request. I just find his mental monologues too cringe and childish for my taste here.

Considering most of summoned hero is high schoolers you aren't that far off. Lol

 

[Oblycoris]

Please tell me she is pregnant, if this is actually something else like a plot device to use for him to help the humans or at least to go out and do somethings and in turn kind of help the humans imma be very very grumpy about it

 

[Pandacyborg]

I have no idea what happens in the novel, but it could end up being like an edgier version of Level 2 cheat power or whatever it’s called

 

[Brickdownjc]

Not even bothering with the trope, author straight up skipped to the retirement life in 10 pages.

 

[IamaTire]

Don't tell me that the title will only have sence for like 1 or 2 chapters

 

[Swordhaxor]

Error in page 20

"They" because "we haven't been able to confirm who that is"

 

[Shinigamisama]

You're trying to get him to your side, right, Princess?
Then why did you bring that stupid knight along?
Let the former hero live in peace with his former demon queen/princess waifu.

 

[brocoli01]

Oh uh... Pregnant?

 

[jackjack9]

Interesting start

 

[Darkshade13]

Error in page 20

"They" is acceptable here if the speaker doesn't know the gender of the person they're talking about.

 

[lordb1]

Mc Isekai as the hero.
Kill the demon King.
Get betrayed by human.
Destroy human kingdom.
Run away with a demon queen.

Why do I feel that MC’s mind is like that of a middle schooler more than a war veteran. Muh, I hate the world and everyone, only my beautiful demon queen wife is my ally

What is this ? A kid ?

P/S: I don't think he did anything wrong with destroyed the kingdom that forced him to fight or didn't accept the princess's request. I just find his mental monologues too cringe and childish for my taste here.

It seemed the Demon King respected the MC even though they were enemies so MC trusting the Demon King's daughter makes sense, and he was betrayed by the nation he fought for and then was labeled an outlaw by the rest, so his distrust of other human nations makes sense. He has also made clear he still feels like an outsider to this world.

 

[AzrefReza]

Ah, nice for once to see the over-powerful hero not take in stride being betrayed and executed by the very ones who summoned him. Too bad this good idea goes to shit almost immediately with having the horrendous “noble’s stuck up subordinate can’t keep his fucking mouth shut even though his master is on a diplomatic mission” cliché…


Also, fuck GDS. Not only do you pick series up and drop them almost immediately to scam people into going to your website, but your translations are bad.

I’ve partially destroyed that summoned country.

Are you sure about that? Are you really sure?! Who summons and who gets summoned in this instance? Is the country really getting summoned or is it actually the one doing the summoning ? Could it perhaps be a summoner country instead?!?

– A man has appeared in front of us.
– Appeared in front of us!? Where did they come from!
– We have no idea! They just suddenly appeared…

Wow! Pronouns who don’t stay consistent from one sentence to another! Tell we this is MTL trash without telling me this is MTL trash!

All of the demons… I couldn’t lead all of them properly…

You do realize that Japanese and English don’t have the same word order right?! That you can’t necessarily translate a blablabla wa blablablaru without reordering the words in a way that actually sounds like proper English???!

 

[AzrefReza]

"They" is acceptable here if the speaker doesn't know the gender of the person they're talking about.

No it’s not. They very clearly called him “a man” in the previous bubble. It’s just that this is Japanese, who doesn’t have gendered pronouns, so the MTL has trouble guessing which English pronouns it should be using.

 

[Solipsist]

Mc Isekai as the hero.
Kill the demon King.
Get betrayed by human.
Destroy human kingdom.
Run away with a demon queen.

Why do I feel that MC’s mind is like that of a middle schooler more than a war veteran. Muh, I hate the world and everyone, only my beautiful demon queen wife is my ally

What is this ? A kid ?

P/S: I don't think he did anything wrong with destroyed the kingdom that forced him to fight or didn't accept the princess's request. I just find his mental monologues too cringe and childish for my taste here.

Sorry if you got spammed via replies, but -- yes, this is most definitely written by a teenager, or at least this is FOR teenagers.
This story is going to burn itself out with its power-fantasies with 10 chapters, max.

 

[Akudia94]

I think that with all the hardship he has to endure during his time fighting the demon king and all the other shit, he would mature a bit, not much but more tough mentally. But I don't see anything tough about him at all beside his power is OP, his inner monologue and everything seem like a kid come up with a setting and just let it roll.

Well, this is just how I see it, I don't think he did anything wrong with destroy the human kingdom to retaliate or refuse the princess but I just find his inner monologue cringe.

Like how he keep mention that the world is shitty and how only his wife is his ally and the only one love him and on his side in all the world.

Dude seem like someone who is under mental illness which make him hate the whole world and obsesesed with his wife to keep himself together. That is kinda unhealthy.

Well, this is just my opinion though, everyone has their own taste.

that only works if he already an adult when he is summoned. he is child soldiers that is kidnapped from his home and family and force to fight a war that he have nothing to do with. then after the service, they want to execute him and the people of the world didn't even protest about it. he is right that after he destroy that country, other countries put bounty on him instead of acknowledge that he have right to be crash out for such betrayal. basically people of that world agree that he should die for the world when he finish his duty.

That basically PTSD. Chinese and Korean still hate japanese for what their army did during WW2. none of current generation have suffer from those war yet they still have linger hatred within. they hate for what they represent, ignorant and diminishing the horrows IJN did during war.

he have legitimate reason to hate that world. be more mature, you meant be more unfeeling about betrayal and kidnapping and want to kill him? even Veteran suffer PTSD worst than that.

 

[14Darius28]

Mc Isekai as the hero.
Kill the demon King.
Get betrayed by human.
Destroy human kingdom.
Run away with a demon queen.

Why do I feel that MC’s mind is like that of a middle schooler more than a war veteran. Muh, I hate the world and everyone, only my beautiful demon queen wife is my ally

What is this ? A kid ?

P/S: I don't think he did anything wrong with destroyed the kingdom that forced him to fight or didn't accept the princess's request. I just find his mental monologues too cringe and childish for my taste here.

I don't see it as cringe really. He owes that kingdom nothing. They just came out and asked. They didn't bring any assurances. No bribe or even gratitude. He saved all of the humans by killing the Demonking but not just that one kingdom. No one said thank you. Just do more work. Then that one guy. No allegence to the human world but bow to my princess. Her authority should shackle you. They came with nothing but the audacity.

 

[14Darius28]

Wut? Are they dumb? These people sound like they want to try wrestling molten lava.

They are very desperate.

 

[Raptorofwar]

Down with harem MCs, up with MCs who are just total wifeguys.

 

[windfang]

Noble knight here is extreme dumb for a princess escort, again with entire country betray OP heroes like that
I doubt this world IQ standard is at medium level.
MC didn't have to return to Japan with this kind of wife! better stay forever in the forest