Yofukashi no Uta - Vol. 20 Ch. 199 - A Fascinating Tale. You Should Become a Writer.

[koga88]

 

[Darkchung]

I sure wish I could've spent high school moonlighting with a sexy detective instead of masturbating and playing emulators. I feel so inadequate.

 

[CanerieRoe]

GOD I'm underwhelmed. The story really tanked after the detective showed up.

That was like… years ago atp
There’s significantly more of the story post-detective vs pre-detective
You might just not like this story

 

[azrejelly]

its so over

 

[StaceyDaSquidster]

Peak fiction, best modern shonen

 

[DustyOldQrow]

damn, I feel like this author just absolutely loves writing love stories but hates writing endings to them. Like, for fucks sake just let your protags get together for once.

 

[EDarkness1]

damn, I feel like this author just absolutely loves writing love stories but hates writing endings to them. Like, for fucks sake just let your protags get together for once.

They split up, then some time later (a year or years) the other one shows up again and they finally get together.

Roll credits

 

[Pouco-chan]

So...is he going to keep this half-vampire crap? Imao that's cheating u'know~💢

 

[NickieTheFool]

Lmao man half these comments are like "its peak" "its mid" bro we aint even done yet

 

[McYeet]

I find this chapter nice actually. If this was the last one, I'd be fine with it. Let's see what 200 will bring us. A sweet and good ending? Or just more laid back epilogue?

 

[Yaboyhg80]

My man will starve himself with that much meat in his plate? /s

Anyways, keep the copium going cause i don't think this ending will be that happy

 

[CanerieRoe]

Kou and Nazuna’s relationship is super adorable, but I think that made y’all assume that this was a “love story” when it’s actually about the healing that can come from temporarily escaping your normal reality.
There is something to be said (I read this in the comments of the last chapter somewhere) that this story is basically telling you to hurry up and go back to being a normal person already, but at least that’s a critique of the themes based on the actual information presented and not complaining about how the sexy vampire lady didn’t end up with the lost middle schooler…

 

[Ingway]

Oh boy, the ending is probably gonna be some "up in the air" type shit where he finds her again as the assistant or something. Have to say, the ending is not really resonating with me.

 

[catsdontsmile]

100% the ending is going to involve the gimmick of his beeping watch which he is still wearing. Anyway, this author seems terrible at wrapping up his work and this feels like it got axed
Yeah yeah it won awards, so did arrested development

 

[PudimSxSxS]

Perfect ending: Kou and the detective fall in love and get married

 

[Gem-Bug]

Dang

 

[geruhn9122]

I'm gonna slap my balls with a mallet if Nazuna doesn't show up in the end

 

[Guyincognitus]

The end.

 

[UnvalidUserName]

So...is he going to keep this half-vampire crap? Imao that's cheating u'know~💢

It really is. It's being a vampire with none of the drawbacks

 

[eviljackspicer]

I can only see this ending with the sound of a wet fart and me pounding sand