Wasn't expecting much when i saw "this is my first translation" and "can't be bothered to clean", but i have to say, not only do i swallow my words, but also an entire encyclopedia. was A LOOOOT better than expected. All texts seem to make sense (which is the first time i saw a "first translation" with no apparent mistakes btw.)
but also even though the translations above the panels isn't something one would usually do, i thought it was pretty cool. it somehow manages to keep the "originality" or something. it looks more natural, idk (but it's probably not a good idea, i guess?)
Anyways, this translation was some good shit, and i regret lowering my expectations by reading the first page.