Yurucamp △ - Snake Camp (Doujinshi) - Ch. 1

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Not bad. Good job overall. Though some additional proofreading would have helped. For example in the first page it should have been lighting not litting.
And in the pinecone should be lit bubble excellent fire starters would have been better.

I can't remember if there were more chapters. I feel like I saw a few on danbooru.
 
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Not bad. Good job overall. Though some additional proofreading would have helped. For example in the first page it should have been lighting not litting.
And in the pinecone should be lit bubble excellent fire starters would have been better.

I can't remember if there were more chapters. I feel like I saw a few on danbooru.
Thanks and changed!

Yes there are more on danbooru.
 

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