Thanks and changed!Not bad. Good job overall. Though some additional proofreading would have helped. For example in the first page it should have been lighting not litting.
And in the pinecone should be lit bubble excellent fire starters would have been better.
I can't remember if there were more chapters. I feel like I saw a few on danbooru.
the shows narrator is the japanese voice actor for both solid snake and big boss so their putting big boss into the scenes where the narrator is talking as if he's actually thereI don't understand why exists but I am grateful it does.