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Oh man thanks for the heads upI guess I should write a spoiler warning from Chapter 1 instead of on Chapter 2.
Abandon all hope if you think anything is interesting. The main premise from the title, having a harem of MILF is technically correct.
But they're such background characters that it's often forgotten about.
The real focus of the story is, spoilers a plenty.
The ineffective "revenge" non-NTR story where the MC thinks he's being harsh but in reality is making everyone happy, including the deadbeat husbands who basically give their wives away to the MC and get in return hot underage slave girl wives who happen to look like their own daughters, so they're P2 recolors of the party members of the hero team, and they never notice because they're deadbeat dads who are happily becoming functional and happy members of society thanks to the MC's "revenge". He talk no jutsu convinces his MILF wives that his revenge is the way to go. The husbands are all clearly shown to be abusive to their wives in some way shape or form. So the MC's revenge is to make them happy with a non-NTR story. Well you said you like it not being NTR so eh. I guess i tworks for you?
So that takes up a lot of chapters. 2nd item that takes up a lot of chapters is the fall from grace of the hero and the giant mess that makes, which then becomes his triumphant upgrade back into the good graces of the people and switching from being the hero of the kingdom to being the hero of the empire. Everyone in the hero team essentially get a turn around to become generic characters either in the MC's party or the hero in his own party as he creates a new harem of an inept albino slave girl and a demon vampiress, because the MC eventually creates eternal peace between humans and demons without killing the demon lord.
So that also takes up a lot of chapters. 3rd item that takes up a lot of chapters is the MC becoming the, this isn't a parody and this is specifically what he is in the story, Humanoid Golden Dragon Lord of Luck whose ultimate power is that everything goes well for him and his every wishes are granted automatically by his insane luck, the dragon who accidentally turned him into that showcases that power by throwing a giant blast that should've killed him but it fizzled out into nothingness by his literal plot armor.
You might wonder where the MILF harem comes in. They're set dressing. They're background characters who comment here and there and sometimes helps move the other 3 plots detailed above forward and in every meaningful story beat, they're left behind. To note, the MILF harem is composed of the unit of S rank ex-adventurer harem, which are the 4 initial MILF, the authority MILF who are the first princesses and saint of the kingdom, empire and church so he's the ruler of the entirety of the human continent. And the MILF goddess since he became an immortal dragon lord god above gods. The story element of him becoming said dragon lord god above gods is also what led to half the demons worshiping him and the demon lord effectively calling for peace.
You might think that at any time everything above is well told and is interesting. Eh, it's okay. Like I said, it's all mediocre. It's passable. It's Morbius. It sure is what I detailed above, and it sure is what happens. Expect nothing of interest. And if you wanted sex. Don't.
The MILF harem, again, is second place to the other stories above. But hey, now that on Chapter 185 he made the entire human race and demon race call for peace and is confirmed to be stronger than even god and immortal and ageless. Maybe now he can finally have a slice of life slow life harem fun time with the MILF.
Except the last few chapters have been focused on the hero party and them powering up, which is meaningless since the MC is the Golden Dragon Lord God of Luck, and you would think we'd be getting more of the MILF, but instead we're getting him raising the girls who got tossed out of the hero party and far more focus on them then on the MILF team.
Again. The premise of the story is playing second fiddle to everything else. So even as a trashy Redo of Healer type I'm here for the smut, this ain't it chief. And if you're expecting subversive hey the world building is pretty damn solid despite all the shmex going on like Harem in the Labyrinth of Another World. The world building is pretty mediocre.
The start is full of promise. Then a few chapters in, it flatlines. It doesn't fall off a cliff, it just becomes dead from mediocrity. You will get some sex scenes but they're pretty much just there. Two orgies from what I recall, each of the first four MILF get a single session each, actually I only recall 2 of the 4 getting a one on one, but I'm going to assume I just forgot about the 3rd and 4th one getting a one on one because of how much of an afterthought it was. And that's about it. 185 chapters.
Edit: Oh, I forgot.
When he becomes the Golden Dragon Lord of Luck is shortly after he gets the harem of 4 ex S-rank adventurer MILF. So basically you get set up that he might go adventuring and go on a rise in power by being already overpowered and supported by 4 overpowered MILF with some fanservice in between combat time, you don't. He becomes Plot Armor incarnate and more powerful than everything on the planet right after establishing a party with the 4 ex S-adventurer MILF, and from there on he always goes out Solo. So establishing that they're these overpowered ex adventurers who're S rank and each individual MILF is stronger than the whole hero party is meaningless, from the start to where we are right now.
if that really happens then it's gonna be such a great wasted potential, man now i am sad but at least you saved me the time and the despair of it, then what series do you recommend i really hope the one doing the drawings changes a little the story i don't want to see such trash