Not sure is it my attention span was quite decreased or not since what I read today was nothing different from previous ones (epub WN that scraped from Novelpia or elsewhere), but I can't focus on it. The approach on this one writing is quite much. The author loves to expand the narrative and shorten the character dialogue. I mean, it's not a bad approach, but the author really need to learn how to balance them. There's no prohibition on prefer a technique but learning to balance between those two is important for a writer.
Or maybe just my attention span that was really fucked up? Dunno lol
A fate worse than death.

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