Harapeko Oyako to Motokare Yanushi - Ch. 10

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Yes MC, make your move! That’s how a grown ass adult behaves
I understand people wanting 'mc to make a move'
But realistically speaking, as an adult even more so, his hesitation makes sense. Most people would think twice before trying to make work with your ex again, with a daughter even more so. There is a lot of baggage there that needs to be unpacked
 
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He's not really moving the needle forward in this situation - in fact he's only prolonging its frozen state.
He'd be truly moving forward if he was the one to bid them farewell with a big smile on his face, finally accepting her leaving and moving on, and moving on himself. That said, that'd hardly be romantic, and there's still the mystery of the girl's father.

This series, so far, is oddly reminding me of another series (that I can't remember the name of) where a man finds out he had a child with the love of his life who had previously left him (and now died). The father/daughter relationship was great, but the mother is blood boiling to read about, as she made the father, herself, and daughter all miserable with her own selfish decisions that she never really fully discussed with anyone else (her leaving the father was supposed to make him free and happy, but he was miserable without her).
I get the feeling that this series will be similar in annoying selfish decisions.
 
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He's not really moving the needle forward in this situation - in fact he's only prolonging its frozen state.
He'd be truly moving forward if he was the one to bid them farewell with a big smile on his face, finally accepting her leaving and moving on, and moving on himself. That said, that'd hardly be romantic, and there's still the mystery of the girl's father.

This series, so far, is oddly reminding me of another series (that I can't remember the name of) where a man finds out he had a child with the love of his life who had previously left him (and now died). The father/daughter relationship was great, but the mother is blood boiling to read about, as she made the father, herself, and daughter all miserable with her own selfish decisions that she never really fully discussed with anyone else (her leaving the father was supposed to make him free and happy, but he was miserable without her).
I get the feeling that this series will be similar in annoying selfish decisions.

Otaku no Musume san sounds ike that, expect the mother is still alive.

But it really hits all the other plots points: dad never got over the mother, mother "left him" to "free" him, mother is incredibly selfish, father/daughter relationship is good...
 
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What's this??? Chapter 10? Double digits unlocked! It seems like yesterday that people were at each other's throat in the comments, they grow so fast!

Of course, the growth in chapter doesn't always equate to an increase in adult behaviour in our protagonists. Just a few chapter ago, Kyou was all "I can't let Minori cry because of my hesitancy" so of course she goes on a not-date(!) where SHE is the one that thinks about it as a date(!!) and makes sure to do it behind her daughter's back(!!!), because that worked so well last time (admittedly, that was the daughter misunderstanding a conversation, but still).

The whole, this is/isn't a date quantum state is, once again, a bit disappointing to see in people who are adults (allegedly) but at least it makes even clearer where they stand emotionally. It's also nice to see that Kyou's inability to avoid starvation without the MC goes back to before this story even started. :ROFLMAO:

Also, it's nice to see how you can pretend to forget drawing your girlfriend all the time and Kyou just buys it. Remember, these guys are adults and they have to pretend to not remember what they used to do when they were dating in the past because it's embarrassing or something. To be blunt: it's stupid that this is embarrassing to him, and it's stupid that she just believes he forgot (they have been without contact for a long time, but unless they dated for 2 days, he IS going to remember at least this much). Well, it's not really important, it just paints this stiff/awkward picture of how these two are around each other which doesn't sit well with me...

...So we double-down on it at the end, of course. But first, let's celebrate Kyou actually findind a house! This might very well be the first show of competency from her in the entire run so far, so while it pains me that she didn't step on any rakes in this chapter, we should give credit where it's due. Don't worry though, our MC is here to save the day with some nonsense! "I am embarrassed to touch on our past but I'll casually put my hand on your face and then instead of being honest and tell you I want to date, I'll just be coy and ask you to model for me". He is getting all broody because she is "just" going to leave, but what was he expecting, actually? They weren't really dating up to this point, so of course she'd leave.

All in all, it's more of the same: what might be cute if this was a couple of high-schoolers, appears much less endearing when it's adults (one with a teenager daughter, no less). This story still needs some honesty and straight-forward conversations.

The fact they are parting ways so soon also pushes the whole premise in the trash can. Was there really a need to have them live together all of a sudden, if the situation could be solved this easily (and it's so trivial it gets solved off screen)? Sure, you can say it showed the MC what he was missing, but boy there were millions of ways to go about this that weren't so tone-deaf, and could comfortably lead to the same outcomes. Still, I believe in the author's ability to create rakes for Kyou to step on, the lack of rakes this chapter was just a fluke. I HAVE to believe this, otherwise, what am I even doing here?
 
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all this time and we still have not addressed their break-up, her having a child with someone else, then not staying with them and now they keep acting like there wasn't a reason that lead them to break up? bruh, come on

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but the stove is off
 
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Huh lol, imagine the comments if this happened earlier when the incels were still here
 
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At this point, it feels very contrived that MC isn’t asking her the questions we all want answered. It’s hard to believe the author expects us to accept this level of avoidance without any justification. My guess is they’ll handwave it with some flimsy excuse—like saying MC is too afraid to ask, so he just dodges them. But if that’s the case, it’s just lazy writing. The story would be much stronger if the characters showed even a shred of realism.

Thanks for the chapter!
its been ten chapters, we'll get them.
 
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This manga reminds me of the law in France that doesn't allow fathers to get DNA tests and you can go to prison for doing it in another country.
Just that level of absurd retardation with a guy being completely unable to ask incredibly simple questions like "Where's her father?"
He didn't even ask why she ghosted him yet like come on. Sure he can still let them live with him and stuff that isn't too dumb but never asking these questions is very dumb.
 
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And the girl should do a nude model for him

This manga reminds me of the law in France that doesn't allow fathers to get DNA tests and you can go to prison for doing it in another country.
Just that level of absurd retardation with a guy being completely unable to ask incredibly simple questions like "Where's her father?"
He didn't even ask why she ghosted him yet like come on. Sure he can still let them live with him and stuff that isn't too dumb but never asking these questions is very dumb.
CUck nation
 
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You know, this whole dynamic makes no fucking sense when they seem perfectly comfortable and happy with each other, especially when neither give any freaking indication as to why they would have even split apart.
I know the author has to keep baiting so people have a reason to read by not giving any answers, but it sure feels annoying.
 

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