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what the fuck bitch
Wait. The soccer club got disbanded? or the current team only (with members only getting expelled from school)?
Well then, good thing you didn't read it then, Champ! Don't get why you had to waste a comment just to say that, but well My stuff always attracts bored weirdo's I supposeI actually might have read your stuff if you wrote paragraphs.
I like how you basically said what the plot is going to be but then added that you wished he jumped instead lol so you basically just wanted to remove the fluffy romance.Part of me thinks that it would be kinda fine if there was like a side version of this were MC actually jumps, just maybe survives.
Preferably falls in front of the cheater girl window when she looks outta it worried if MC decided to stop going to school cause of the bullying. Like she looks and then something flies down in front of her window, she goes closer to the window looks down and there is MC's unconscious and bloodied body. Realisation hitting her brain that MC probably wont forget all the pain and just take her back as a GF after she have had enough of fucking the asshole throughout all the school years like she believed, would've been golden.
Then the ambulance comes, teachers/nurse/whole school/parents start investigating and shit hits the fan - as in Kondo and cheating whore. All the people who bullied him based on rumours, and then they would go like crumb after crumb and find out the mastermind and stuff. All other stuff/people could work here too - like MC after hospitalisation could come back and stop the Ai from doing the thing he did - already knowing it wasn't worth it. The GOATs could still help with the investigation and stuff. Or potentially they both fallen when she tried to jump and he tries to stop her like in this version just didn't succeed, and they lie next to each other in hospital, have a deep talk and develop their relationship there.
Cause as it is its a bit "disjointed" if you will. Dude nearly commits sudoku, helps a new girl from doing it too, they just kinda life on the side of the story, while the whole revenge is orchestrated by 3rd parties if you will. At least MC kinda has a 1 on 1 with the cheater and tells her what he thinks about so its not 100% side stuff.
Maybe in future chapters there will be more stuff between the bullied couple and the bullies - bad people realising how much they fucked up and stuff and it will feel less "bad".
Aaaaaaaaand dropped. Not my thing. Have fun, people.![]()
While reading the Novel after reading Chapter 2 a month ago. I had the same though as well. Not to OVERTAKE the Main Story, What If's should NOT always be like "It's tough for a MOB in the Otome" where the Writer of that made a What If that spin off into it's OWN long ass story LOL! Here it doesn't need to be long! Just short and having the LOGIC already established in the main story. But I can see things ending SO MUCH worse in this scenarioI like how you basically said what the plot is going to be but then added that you wished he jumped instead lol so you basically just wanted to remove the fluffy romance.
ALL of them, they all were involved in one way or another so the entire club is disbanded, Some helped with spreading the false rumors and others who were in his class helped in defacing his desk. Miyuki female friend has a relationship with the Soccer Club as she knows them from her friend circles so she helped, however this was because she was under the impression Aono was an abusive creep because of Miyuki's lying, the extent of her help is only enough when the hunt begins, she doesn't get in too much trouble, especially when she confesses sooner, at that point Miyuki was exposed and suffice to say she was DONE with Miyuki and her lying slut self after that since she realized as with others involved they put their FUTURES at risk! Teacher even COUNTERS her "I thought I was helping a friend" by stating she should have left it to the Authorities, school and the two's PARENTS to solve it then instead of taking it into her own hands! If I remember, she was the one who let them INTO the classroom and pointed out Aono's desk for them! She AT LEAST has remorse and tries to redeem herself. The rest well some in the club come after HER and others for the Suspensions as they were the ones to help identify them, Leading to the Club's Disbandment once it was clear EVERYONE was involved! Even the Captain as said KNEW Kondo was using the club for his WHIMS but said nothing and enabled it. He gets a scolding about how he FAILED the Club as it's Leader by not stopping Kondo or reporting his activities! (The idiot even THOUGHT if he said "I'm sorry I will do better" it would fix things, only thinking about saving his "Future Prospects"! Also to add that he's also told if he feared for his future he should have informed of Kondo's bad behavior in general, but his lack of "giving a shit" made him just as complacent as those who did what Kondo wanted by enabling)
The Literature Club was next on the chopping block as other then TWO members, the rest did what the Manager said and were working WITH the Soccer Club to Slander and bully Aono, If you missed my other spoiler, the Manager of the club, Aono's FEMALE Senpai was the one behind this mess, being the one who arranged Miyuki to be introduced to Kondo and Kondo to TARGET her! Worse part is she tried the CHEATER plan on Aono first, she tried to seduce him and he didn't bite, hence moving on to Miyuki, so to others who say otherwise, she never EXPECTED Miyuki to be so WEAK AND EASY, feeling SORRY for Aono that he was loyal in REJECTING her, yet Miyuki didn't show that in return on her part
Im confused was Miyuki originally introduced to Andou so she could get "love advice" or something else?ALL of them, they all were involved in one way or another so the entire club is disbanded, Some helped with spreading the false rumors and others who were in his class helped in defacing his desk. Miyuki female friend has a relationship with the Soccer Club as she knows them from her friend circles so she helped, however this was because she was under the impression Aono was an abusive creep because of Miyuki's lying, the extent of her help is only enough when the hunt begins, she doesn't get in too much trouble, especially when she confesses sooner, at that point Miyuki was exposed and suffice to say she was DONE with Miyuki and her lying slut self after that since she realized as with others involved they put their FUTURES at risk! Teacher even COUNTERS her "I thought I was helping a friend" by stating she should have left it to the Authorities, school and the two's PARENTS to solve it then instead of taking it into her own hands! If I remember, she was the one who let them INTO the classroom and pointed out Aono's desk for them! She AT LEAST has remorse and tries to redeem herself. The rest well some in the club come after HER and others for the Suspensions as they were the ones to help identify them, Leading to the Club's Disbandment once it was clear EVERYONE was involved! Even the Captain as said KNEW Kondo was using the club for his WHIMS but said nothing and enabled it. He gets a scolding about how he FAILED the Club as it's Leader by not stopping Kondo or reporting his activities! (The idiot even THOUGHT if he said "I'm sorry I will do better" it would fix things, only thinking about saving his "Future Prospects"! Also to add that he's also told if he feared for his future he should have informed of Kondo's bad behavior in general, but his lack of "giving a shit" made him just as complacent as those who did what Kondo wanted by enabling)
The Literature Club was next on the chopping block as other then TWO members, the rest did what the Manager said and were working WITH the Soccer Club to Slander and bully Aono, If you missed my other spoiler, the Manager of the club, Aono's FEMALE Senpai was the one behind this mess, being the one who arranged Miyuki to be introduced to Kondo and Kondo to TARGET her! Worse part is she tried the CHEATER plan on Aono first, she tried to seduce him and he didn't bite, hence moving on to Miyuki, so to others who say otherwise, she never EXPECTED Miyuki to be so WEAK AND EASY, feeling SORRY for Aono that he was loyal in REJECTING her, yet Miyuki didn't show that in return on her part
As far as i rememer you are correct on the love advice part since Eiji was very passive in their relationship and she didn't try to talk about it. But it was all a set up anyway from the Manager to corrupt her and hurt Eiji, doesn't really matter what the reason was...Im confused was Miyuki originally introduced to Andou so she could get "love advice" or something else?
And also if you or anyone has read the LN spoilers what is the new girls(blonde kohai) trauma shes talking about? And I know it doesnt matter but is she(blonde kohai) inexperienced in romance or a virgin because I think it would be nice since her and the MC would be each others 1sts?
Yeah, but that is escapist wish fulfilment fun. Yeah, it's bonkers and OTT, but I love it with a side of eye-rolling. I've actually given this a 10 ⭐ based on the lunacy of the WNread the WN, and it's pretty unrealistic.. the punishment for all of the culprits and the bandwagons
Dunno why, but this comment made me laughImagine reading zamaa and want realism.![]()
Im confused was Miyuki originally introduced to Andou so she could get "love advice" or something else?
And also if you or anyone has read the LN spoilers what is the new girls(blonde kohai) trauma shes talking about? And I know it doesnt matter but is she(blonde kohai) inexperienced in romance or a virgin because I think it would be nice since her and the MC would be each others 1sts?