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thanks for chapter!
Yajin is very lucky
Yajin is very lucky
Next chapter; It was all just a dream, and then Yajin wakes up.Wow, so many people who aren't assholes. What kind of magical place is it? That's definitely not an "yajin tensei" world!
I don't know...Yajin was also unconscious for most of that, maybe Yajin is the one to blame...? The Church may become an enemy now that he's going to mass.Wow, so many people who aren't assholes. What kind of magical place is it? That's definitely not an "yajin tensei" world!
It's got to be one of the guards. It just takes one of them to sell him out.Alright folks place bets on who the next betrayal is gonna come from
Seinen syndrome where characters don't do a lot of exaggerated facial expressions other than a serious one while talking, so the characters come off as stiff compared to the usual baseline in mangaSomehow this artstyle doesnt feel 'alive'. Idk if you guys could understand but it just feels so inanimate. I know its a manga, but some i read feels more alive than this
Somehow this artstyle doesnt feel 'alive'. Idk if you guys could understand but it just feels so inanimate. I know its a manga, but some i read feels more alive than this
I would also add that the light and shadow game is pretty weak, minus the very lightly use of shadows in sharp angle places like noses, necks, roofs and under clothes, the shadow use of the artist is pretty scarce.Seinen syndrome where characters don't do a lot of exaggerated facial expressions other than a serious one while talking, so the characters come off as stiff compared to the usual baseline in manga
Frieren has a similar but lesser issue
This looks better alr. Maybe the shadow really seems nonexistentImage 2
I would also add that the light and shadow game is pretty weak, minus the very lightly use of shadows in sharp angle places like noses, necks, roofs and under clothes, the shadow use of the artist is pretty scarce.
A little bit of ambient occlusion and more bold Illumination would really help the art.
Edit: A quick edit with AI to show how just a little of shadows could help the scene.