Koori no Hime wa Chiisana Hidamari de Tokasaretai - Vol. 4 Ch. 28

[MangaDex]

 

[lengend]

Nice to see this cute story back o/ ! Thanks for the chapter !

 

[Jack1996]

Thanks for the pick up

 

[Novis]

LOL treating him like a kid there. That got a chuckle out of me.

 

[brndndss]

Ume.. dating a college student? should i be worried about that age gap...

 

[Exeos]

thanks for picking this up

i can't judge the translation quality, but i personally am really not a fan of this font. if you wouldn't mind, maybe try a different one next time?

 

[UdenEmpati]

Good effort. Redrawing is just something that will come after time and consistent effort & practice. Picking up previous chapter raws and practicing with those will help you match the style of the artist for this series specifically--and doing that for any given series will help with each distinct style of illustration.

But there's no "magic fix"--just comes down to consistent applied effort.

Beyond that - look around for various tools like different fonts and so on--keep things like readability in mind, and look at other established & successful groups to see how they do things like typesetting and the like. Cleanliness of presentation is a big part of TL work, and while it will take time and improve the more you do it, spending some of that actively studying other quality TL releases and practicing on your own time (when you are able) will push the quality of your own work all the more.

Only other thing I would say, as an etiquette thing--sometimes groups working on certain series just get held up with stuff and don't keep a regular release schedule. Contacting them first if it's been awhile and seeing if it's okay to release a chapter, can go a long way to ensuring you're not stepping on others' toes. There is a general dislike of "snipers" in the TL community, so anything you can reasonably do to avoid that sort of situation will earn you goodwill.

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To the chapter itself--yeah, PrettyBoy's not going to give up. Clearly he's used to just getting whatever he feels he's "owed", but hopefully this won't turn into an entire volume's worth of chapters of dealing with him.

ML needs to get his act together, though. Looks like he finally sorted through the fact that he's not okay with her "just dating anyone", but he'll need to stop doing this in half-measures, just as his friend said.
They've got support, and even if she doesn't "get" romantic relationships or dating (a well-worn
trope, but I'm not getting into that here), it's clear the FL does enjoy spending time with him, for him. He's clearly important to her. And even if their relationship progresses and doesn't look "conventional" or whatever, as long as it makes sense to them....that's what's important.

They're already pseudo-parenting between them, anyway. In some senses they've skipped steps in the cohabitation phase of life so. I'm betting she'd not let her kid brother be taken care of by just anyone.
As is always the case--they need to just sit down and talk about what they want. He needs to get over this "am I really good enough" mental block, and she needs to be told clearly that he likes her and wants to be with her romantically--but that they can not sweat the "how-to" business, just keep doing what they're doing, but that maybe they should go see a movie by themselves sans children siblings, or something.

 

[Insignis]

Its kinda funny "juxtaposition" where the supposedly prettiest girl at school is a "cold emotionless zombie" whose brain was thus far 99% committed to her brother, and slowly as iceberg she is finding out what romantic love and stuff is thanks to MC.

While the glasses wearing "plain Jane" has an few years older boyfriend, and they are probably railing each other whenever they meet at either both of their homes assuming there are times they can meet at her place without her brother being there (or with him being there for bonus "excitement"), or just at his place, and/or hotels .

 

[razorshaleh]

Mizudori rejected Kaito 3x times in a row and right up until the very last page, Kaito was still trying to mess up the relationship between MC and Mizudori and at least MC is starting to realize he’s got feelings for Mizudori after talking with his best friend

thank you for translating

 

[Phantaminium]

Pretty solid translation overall, I'd beg you to look up scanalation fonts since comic sans is like poison to my eyes personally. The readability is great, honestly the quality is higher than I'd expect for most first timers. I'd say invest in a QC if you can find one, not that there are any issues I saw with the chapter but it can up consistency over time.

I'm glad handsome-kun got shut down with a knee, heart and head shot so there can be no misunderstanding. It seems he's more an accelerate for the main ship which is fine. If he's not a huge dick? Fingers crossed.

Thanks for the TL.

 

[DerekUlty]

Good translation, I hope you'll keep it up. Thanks for the work.

 

[Youn0]

This series doesn't need a villain. I hope we don't go down that route...

 

[Alteraucous]

"tHaT GuY iS wITH mIZuDOri YUKi. wHo Is tHaT gUY?"

Mf, better question, who are you!? You are unnecessary. Aoba can figure his feelings on his own by being a bumbling idiot.

 

[EnFiveFour]

Is this a snipe or what? 'Cause 2 months without release in a monthly series is not a signal of a group dropping the series. And Sappy Snail Scans haven't said anything on their posts.

Without the original releaser confirmation, consider they are keeping the project alive.
Is sad to remember this every time this happen 'cause people don't care to follow even minor courtesy: DO NOT SUPPORT SNIPERS.

 

[Freman]

Yuki really needs to open up to her feelings.

 

[NotoriousB0B]

Is this a snipe or what? 'Cause 2 months without release in a monthly series is not a signal of a group dropping the series. And Sappy Snail Scans haven't said anything on their posts.

Without the original releaser confirmation, consider they are keeping the project alive.
Is sad to remember this every time this happen 'cause people don't care to follow even minor courtesy: DO NOT SUPPORT SNIPERS.

it's not that serious, he literally said he will stop if someone else continues it

 

[arimareiji]

After Even the Student Council Has Its Holes, I never thought I'd be saying this to someone named Tan, but thank you much. (^_^)º

 

[EnFiveFour]

You can go for an established series if the current group working on its translation haven't said they are dropping it. Also, if you start in scanlation, go for a series with zero chapters translated. It's better if it's already complete and it's a short series. that way, you can gain experience with the project. but no. More frequently we are seeing people using machine translations trying to snipe project already curated by competent scanlators.
That's the reason there's an etiquette, to show respect for other people's work an maximize the translation efforts of everyone.
But no, there's always people that just want to read without caring for who does the job.
FUCK THEM AND FUCK SNIPERS.
🖕

 

[jagfanbb]

Yooo dude thanks for picking this up!
This series is too good to fade away.

 

[jagfanbb]

You can go for an established series if the current group working on its translation haven't said they are dropping it. Also, if you start in scanlation, go for a series with zero chapters translated. It's better if it's already complete and it's a short series. that way, you can gain experience with the project. but no. More frequently we are seeing people using machine translations trying to snipe project already curated by competent scanlators.
That's the reason there's an etiquette, to show respect for other people's work an maximize the translation efforts of everyone.
But no, there's always people that just want to read without caring for who does the job.
FUCK THEM AND FUCK SNIPERS.
🖕

Nobody asked.