Kuni ni Saikyou no Barrier wo Hattara Heiwa ni Narisugite Tsuihousaremashita ~Ore no Mahou ga Yabasugite, Bijo to Mazoku ni Kakomarerun da ga!?~ - Ch…

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It's really annoying how this story is structured because it feels like there's a 6/10 or maybe even a 7/10 story here but because the story is written like a record that keeps skipping and it feels like every couple chapters there's a couple missing chapters it just goes straight down to a 4/10.
 
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heroine stabbed causing a huge blood splatter

has no tears or blood or other signs of any kind of damage whatsoever on her


"I'll use a barrier to stabilize the wound!"
Beat me to it, like, wound? What wound? She literally doesn't even have a single scratch :facepalm:

I actually went to look at mangaupdates, this is literally the first work of this mangaka, that explains a lot really, explains why the presentation is pretty bad at times, especially at combat

Though truth be told I don't think it's that bad of a issue cause this isn't a battle manga, so as a whole I feel the manga has presentation good enough, it's just when there's any battle that it's pretty clear the mangaka doesn't know how to do it, I feel this is something the editor should have helped since it's their first work

I think we can only hope battles are not too much of the focus in the long run lol
 
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-this is literally the first work of this mangaka, that explains a lot really, explains why the presentation is pretty bad at times, especially at combat-
It is not an excuse, first time or not the work have go through editor aka quality check and it's passed, pretty much mean this 'underwhelming' quality is passable to sell and acceptable in japan M A Y B E, because it is not axed Y E T.

Let's not forget mangaka too is just a person, with enough time hope he can be better.
 
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