Hey Kredim, for the most recent Dark Gathering chapter 83, is it alright if I make some suggestions?
- On Page 16, the Narrator actually describes the D-Temple Ghost as a 真の超能力者 /
shin no chounoryoku-sha , AKA "true Esper"
- The
jintsuuriki / 神通力 featured throughout the chapter (which you've translated as "Divine Power") is better understood as "ESP"
Heck, English Pokemon has 神通力 translated as the Psychic move "Extrasensory", which is also apt because the literal "god-communion power" originated from ancient belief communion with the gods lets you perform clairvoyance, telepathy, etc.
In parts of this chapter, it's alternatively described as "superpower" /
inou / 異能 too
In short, she's a Ghost/Psychic type with two skillsets, natural-born psychic powers (including psychokinesis of spiritual bodies?) and learnt spiritualist techniques requiring handsigns (which the Narrator constantly says resembles those used by the Onmyouji but not actually Onmyouji techniques)
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- Lastly, this chapter was all over the place about the Class 1 Warrior Ghost being called "Transcendant Buddha" or "Gongen" or "Gonzen", it's messy. Might I provide something consistent?
極めて 天外救世權現
Hone. Heavens-Exceeding Salvation Gongen
- "Heavens-Exceeding" for 天外, based on Page 15 where 天上の理の外にいる 『極みの業」であるmeaning "A 'Supreme Technique' that exceeds/exists outside the logic of the heavens."
Pretty apt for how he's described as "released" / 解放 from the laws of physics on Page 13 too.
- "Salvation Gongen" works for the shorthand 救世權現 throughout the chapter, and "Gongen" is its own distinct type of religious concept too.
- "Hone" for 極めて / kiwamete, "take to the limit", "reach for the peak", "exhaust completely", etc. Given the Warrior's martial prowess and obsession with technique, this is most certainly a command to take his skill to the limit.
This is distinct from the other 極めて / kimete, the one that actually means "decide", "determine", "settle", etc.
Incidentally, his quickdraw technique being "Retro-speed" / 逆速 (Page 14) is an entirely made-up term, meant to contrast the conventional God-speed / 神速 (Page 12)
I hope you'll take these into consideration. Thanks for your work as always!