Watashi no Kokoro wa Oji-san de Aru - Ch. 43

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The saving the child story could have been better if it had some more pages.. going from please safe my child to the child is suddenly there and saved in record time.

Feels very much like someone had to cut pages to make it fit into a magazine.
 
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For Corin's dialogue on page 2, panel 3, saying either "Al's really tearing into them, huh" or "Al really is tearing into them, huh" would be correct.

As always, thanks for bringing this to us, the speed-draw looks good!
 
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The saving the child story could have been better if it had some more pages.. going from please safe my child to the child is suddenly there and saved in record time.

Feels very much like someone had to cut pages to make it fit into a magazine.
I think partly it was to show the growth in Haruka's control over her magic. Could she have pulled that off before? Maybe, but would she have been willing to try? Probably not, out of fear. Now, it was no big deal.

You're right right that it was short, which really removes any dramatic weight it might've had, but if it was meant to showcase character growth rather than drama, I feel it works rather well for that.
 
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Its so cool to see Haruka growing she's so young and getting a chance to make up for her past is great.

I love that she's no gung ho like other isekai heroes
 
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Hey now that is pretty good for 38 minutes work. :clap:
I really appreciate seeing people that can spend the time and focus to draw. It is like seeing a performer smile during their performance, showing that they enjoy themselves.

So many things I want to draw, sketch, write, or program, but the time investment vs things I have to do just never work out. Spend most of my "free time" (2-3 hours) isolating myself while playing games as a form of self-care mediation.
 

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