I just wish that author didn't do this so sooner. Like this, it's like Fuwa's always been in love with Sora but just was unaware of it. I really wanted the author to take some more time developing Fuwa's feelings.
Can't say that the devil's threeway is really my thing, but respects to Midori-sensei for doing this. Quite possibly, this is the rarest type threeway ending in all of fiction.
Oh man, my heart ached so much at the Miiko cameo.
I mean, narratively, him and Manaki are already in love dating, while him and Tamaki aren't. There's just more progress to be cleared with the tomboy persona.
Personally, I don't think your TL is hard to read. It's just that I didn't get what her "I wonder that" meant. There was one error on panel 2 of the last page tho. It should've been "you normally do" instead of "does".