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    Touhou ~ Starving Marisa's Blessed Meal - Ch. 3

    @CBC That is fair. She also has to deal with Remilia and Patchouli's moods, and Patchouli can be pretty catty towards her despite her status as a guest of the SDM.
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    Touhou Chireikiden ~ Hansoku Tantei Satori - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - The SDM Case Goes Under the Ground (Pt. IV.I)

    This would be fine if it were one or two chapters for this mystery, but this is also not good mystery writing. You want to give enough information to the audience for them to solve it, and then include things like red herrings to trip up the reader. The longer this runs, the more that becomes an...
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    Toshiue Elite Onna Kishi ga Boku no Mae de dake Kawaii - Vol. 1 Ch. 3.1

    Even if she isn't a rival, parallelogram is going to be perceived as one.
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    @Kampfarsch He thinks the kid is a monster. The joke in this situation is that he completely misread the trick and still managed to say something close enough to the truth that his accidental bluff worked.
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    Living as the Tyrant's Older Sister - Ch. 45

    I am disappointed Ares wasn't the one that bet on Noel.
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    Touhou ~ Starving Marisa's Blessed Meal - Ch. 3

    No one even cares that Meiling didn't see the person who dropped the garlic off at the front gate. I also see that they are continuing the joke that Sakuya is a hellish boss to work under.
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    Two Saints Wander off Into a Different World - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

    They can't learn about the world while on a road trip? Seems like the perfect excuse. They don't even need to do any work, just sit on the airship and sample delicacies while cleaning the miasma.
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    Mado Kara Madoka-chan - Vol. 5 Ch. 57 - Madoka-chan's karate

    @Greatestwest She also didn't have good form on her punches. You want to have your index and middle finger knuckles take the majority of the contact, so that the force you exert is focused on as little of an area as possible.
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    Kobayashi-san Chi no Maid Dragon - Vol. 10 Ch. 92 - Elma and Terne

    @Ovdose Definitely the most powerful we've seen from a dragon so far. Though, Lucoa hasn't done much that is out and out power.
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    Jishou Akuyaku Reijou na Konyakusha no Kansatsu Kiroku - Vol. 4 Ch. 18

    @TracerK That pun is probably the author's intention, honestly.
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    Jinrou e no Tensei, Maou no Fukkan: Hajimari no Shou - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Ryunheit's Conquest

    @BalrogDeMorgoth Yep. There are pros and cons to the way the conquest happened. It will have a lot less bad blood involved, the city will go from newly conquered to fully functional much quicker, and they can keep their presence to a minimum with the cooperation of the existing government and...
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    Senpai ga Uzai Kouhai no Hanashi - Vol. 5 Ch. 98

    At this point, this is the most interesting couple to see. Mostly because the others are already at the point where they are at that annoying point where they are a couple, but not admitting it.
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    Shadows House - Vol. 3 Ch. 35 - Because We Can't Tell

    @jinter The person in charge of the test is trying to make sure Kate fails for some reason, but he hasn't outright cheated her yet.
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    Namae no nai Kaibutsu - Kumo to Shoujo to Ryoki Satsujin - Vol. 1 Ch. 4.2

    This seems like a bit of an obvious red herring given that the first chapter clearly shows he is going to get killed by her.
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    Awkward Senpai - Vol. 1 Ch. 6

    @Vergift Dirge needs to stay dead, thank you very much.
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    Kubo Won't Let Me Be Invisible - Vol. 2 Ch. 13 - A Red Heart and the Sender

    @Reimans Could also be poisoned. It is also frustrating that she didn't try to go head on with it. He might think it is just between friends, but it would be better for it to be clear that it was from her.
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    Living as the Tyrant's Older Sister - Ch. 33

    Well, then. I imagine that Ares will start trying to influence the brother to get in better graces with Alicia. Also: what are you doing, comment section? Are you all forgetting that her second plan was to sleep with Lancelot to get him to marry her so she could use his connections to Ares, and...
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    A Story About Treating a Female Knight, Who Has Never Been Treated as a Woman, as a Woman - Vol. 5 Ch. 92 - The Female Knight VS. Fooly Pt.3

    @KazumaLee94 Fooly has a better track record than Yamcha. Fooly is closer to the party member love interest that is not as powerful as the MC, but has plot relevance due to being the love interest. We haven't quite gotten to the point where someone kidnapped him to get at Leo, but it has gotten...
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