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Her actions here don't make any sense. There is no good reason for her to refuse if he is asking to spend time with her. He's clearly demonstrated that he cares about her and having him on her side is what she needs.

yup was just about to comment the same thing. Contrived on many layers - she can't speak about it, she is being left alone by everyone else, she can't go out to eat on her own or even report anything to anyone. If she takes a huge loss because of this situation I'm definitely dropping this...

The mc is a bit overbearing when it comes to fawning over the characters and the pace felt a bit fast. The first thing she thinks when seeing the ML is that it wouldn't be so bad to be strangled by him? That's a tad much. I don't so much mind the "seemingly innocent FL is actually a schemer"...

I don't really like the mc. His personality is pretty nonexistent. He's a wet blanket on the already mediocre comical moments. Major edgelord vibes. I don't have a strong hatred or annoyance toward it, its just boring.

Half-assed explanations for things are pretty common in anime so I tend to overlook them, but this is just nonsense. He gives away 10 billion because of a law and that's supposed to be some grand statement about the importance of the law and drop the crime rate? I hate to say it, but it really...

Depicting an 8 year old girl like this is unnecessary and strange. Did she really have to have her clothes blown off?

The impacts aren't done very well. I don't like the huge flashing indications of movement that are usually drawn, but to have nothing lacks impact. Looking at it, it feels like he just presses his hand into enemies instead of punching them and the movements feel very sluggish.

This has been decent. The mc can be a bit comically evil sometimes and its strange that the people around him aren't more wary or reluctant after all his behavior. I think the mc is an interesting and unique as a character, but every other character is very cookie-cutter. Personally I wish the...

That sequence of events is more coincidence than perfectly planned. In terms of the attack happening sooner and the force moving to attack her, maybe the enemy had that intel, but she had to have not left yet by the time the force arrived and her means of escape by horseback and on foot from a...

very cliche up to this point...hope we get something more original

tropey/cliche is fine so long as it has some originality to it. I like that he wasn't some reincarnated absurdly op master wizard, but someone who had suffered for his genuine lack of natural talent. Still, I hope he doesn't end up steamrolling everything from this point. Ideally, he would...

Ok lets contextualize this - she was stronger than an adult male when she was 10 years old. That's fantasy, superhuman strength. Strength and fighting ability, fine, but why does it need to be stated that she is so ridiculously strong? It just seems like a superficial addition to the character...

Ngl this is a bit weird to me. She sits there staring at a naked dude and even examines and mentally commentates on his junk. Yeah, I get that there are a lot of harem manga out there, if it was a dude ogling a woman and mentally commentating on her body I'd find it just as weird. On another...

Bruh, more like he's the protagonist and you're some lazy side character. Guy really risked his life to save a kid while you sat by doing nothing and you are worried about him asking for help in the future while you then immediately ask him for a place to stay... Seems like the mc is pretty...

Seems like this might not be my thing. I'm not one for the reluctant hero types.

I don't find the "OP slow life" narrative very compelling usually, if that is what this is going to be then hopefully there'll be at least some interesting points

Rng abilities are trash. Just convenient for the writer.

They really put pubg into an isekai

Damn, bro really did a 180, from beating the shit out of people to giving the most sterile apology

It started out a bit original and with some intrigue sprinkled in, but it's really getting into generic trope territory. If there's at least a little spin then it's not that bad, but this is 1:1 tropey.