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    Boundless Necromancer - Ch. 11

    First real points of criticism, it doesn't make much sense that he would tamper with the sword if he knew he had failed level 1 difficulty every time before. Second, I dislike the fact that the mc was petty enough to beat the guy up. It's understandable, yea, but I wish he had a bit of a cooler...
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    Boundless Necromancer - Ch. 10

    The fact that he has hunter rules and sticky notes on his wall is great worldbuilding.
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    Boundless Necromancer - Ch. 5

    This is great all around so far. Love the use of tactics and the shield.
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    Boundless Necromancer - Ch. 1

    Looks quite promising. Its nice to see an mc that has such extreme motivation and isn't immediately handed everything. I hope things stay challenging for him.
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    The Demon King Levels Up - Vol. 1 Ch. 6

    This is just the writer's power fantasy. It's so disappointing. No substance whatsoever. Some guy bestowed with incredible knowledge and limitless potential just effortlessly gets more powerful for the sake of getting more powerful and gets a date with an attractive girl. This guy's dialogue is...
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    The Demon King Levels Up - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

    Still very generic so far. I wish it went into more details about the memories of the demon king - his goals, accomplishments, and power. I also wish he had more of the demon king's personality. Without that, the fact that he inherited the demon king's memories feels purely like a plot device to...
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    The Demon King Levels Up - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

    Wow this is really all over the place. I would have expected their personalities to merge, but it just seems like he inherited some memories. It's a little more boring that way. Would he be considered a reincarnation if he's basically just the remnants of a clone? He's not sure of it himself so...
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    Gendai no Saikyou Heishi, Isekai Dungeon o Kouryaku Suru - Ch. 5

    Aside from the concept this is absurdly cliche. The mc is an extreme perfect hero type and this is just your standard OP mc plot.
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    Gendai no Saikyou Heishi, Isekai Dungeon o Kouryaku Suru - Ch. 2

    He did tell them to be quiet and he's been on alert/fighting this whole time. Narratively it hasn't been relevant either so I don't see how that's contrived. Seems like you're just overanalyzing. It has some problems, but that's not one of them.
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    Gendai no Saikyou Heishi, Isekai Dungeon o Kouryaku Suru - Ch. 2

    The concept is interesting but this feels a little silly. Its a bit too nonsensical for him to be able to instantly analyze and kill a monster with a knife like that. If he were from some sci-fi world or something like that then yea, but he's just a modern soldier. With that weapon switching...
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    The Holy Emperor's Grandson Is a Necromancer - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    Quite the slapdash introduction. Not much hope for this.
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    The Count’s Youngest Son Is a Gamer - Ch. 7

    Yep. I didn't think too much of his training being skipped before the tournament because I was assuming that it was just skipped over to get to a more significant part of the narrative or reflect on it at a relevant moment, but it hasn't gone anywhere. He went from beating a guy in a tournament...
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    The 31st Piece Turns the Tables - Vol. 2 Ch. 62

    After reading the novel up to ch 242, it gets a bit worse from here. It's still decent, but its a pretty continuous downtrend in quality. To start with, it's a very light novel. Descriptions of anything are few and far between and don't amount to more than a sentence or two at most. Given that...
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    The 31st Piece Turns the Tables - Vol. 2 Ch. 62

    This is very, very good narratively, in those terms I'd rate it top 5 of all of the manga/manhwa I've read. Definitely picking this back up with the novel. Some of the more dramatic scenes don't hit very hard, but that's just the pacing, which is good. The concept is insanely good - the fact...
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    The 31st Piece Turns the Tables - Vol. 1 Ch. 15

    He inherits their abilities? That's a lot. If he starts steamrolling everything it'll be pretty dull.
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    The 31st Piece Turns the Tables - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

    Extremely interesting concept, one of the most interesting I've seen in many years. The way that he acknowledges the fact that the gods have such a different mindset that they would kill their friend of 17 years out of hate is very meaningful. Interacting every day for 17 years is significant...
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    SSS-Class Revival Hunter - Vol. 3 Ch. 91

    Very weird way to respond, but ok. Bye bye?...Anyway, a justice system does not require any kind of trust it only requires the power to enforce it. Key phrase in my first comment: simple justice system, to start with. So, these people had the power to massacre 100k, but did not even attempt to...
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    I Became the Tyrant of a Defense Game - Ch. 46

    Its forced because the series of events is not only unlikely but some of it doesn't make any sense. She had to not detect the MASSIVE golem and get hit by it, her horse had to run away instead of staying nearby, her leg had to break so she couldn't outrun the lumbering golem. The sequence of...
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    Mythic Item Obtained - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    Mc seems like quite the edgelord. The tactics used seem a bit shallow. Frontline blocks with shield -> nuke with magic. That in itself isn't really a problem, it just gives me the impression that it's a setup to be turned on its head by the mc in a way that makes it seem like "everyone is dumb...
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    The Frozen Player Returns - Vol. 3 Ch. 132

    The power scaling feels weird. Overall things feel pretty inconsistent and I think that there have been too many tiers of humans. It's extremely difficult to understand how strong each person is supposed to be when the mc has defeated like 20 different tiers of humans (each time he fights a...
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